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Re: animal wars
I am not into this it just seems.... I don't know A. S.
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Winged Ones
Michel The sun was going to rise soon. The air was turning that blueish gray morning color. I sighed, even though it was cool with the morning I was still ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: really bad....
Thank you for the comments. Other people have also said I have a unique style. That is the only reason I put them up. If you say so I will ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Banana Split
[i] Banana, ice cream and chocolate sauce; That’s all you need for a round of applause, Well, in your stomach of course! Sprinkles, more sauce; a couple’s delight, Take out ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: really bad....
Hey, so here are three doodles I did while listening to a tape about a year ago. I know they are awful, but I would like to know what you ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Alice
I love this. I don't notice any problems (that others haven't already pointed out.) So, I get to give you compliments!Your style is very distinctive, and I am not going ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: animal wars
ooooo can I join still! Name: Misty Age: 2 (human years) Gender: female Type:(animal person or human) Animal Appearance: linx.jpg Skills: Is a good fighter, can make people trust her, ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Winged Ones DT
The wings stuff could where off on Michel. He didn't want to take the stuff in the first place, but Blake and Kaylee got him too(?) Just an idea. Maybe ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Today is one of those days - edited
Thank you for the advice Kyousuke. Sorry, the rest of you didn't help. :) I will try to revise it and make it better. A. S.
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Specifically pepperoni pizza. :) (I'm always hungry)
iamjemo - both parts done.
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Where do I Find a Green Rose? Chapter I pt. 1
"Good night moon," he uttered as he closed the glass window of his room. A better way to phrase this is: he uttered as he closed his bedroom window. (we ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Where do I find a Green Rose? A Prologue
I am here to review like you asked. Before I start I have to tell you if I repeat something someone else already said I am sorry, but I don't ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Foreign Bloom
This isn't really in poem format. If you change it I would be happy to review. :) A. S. P.S. I haven't seen you around so I just want to ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Mail Order From Heaven
First I would like to say that the name really intrigued me whatever you do keep that the same. I really loved the poem. It was very emotional. Only a ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Reviews back in action!
Will you review my poem. It is called Today is one of those days. A. S.
Jun 15, 2010
