Calligraphy

Hi AJ, I'm here to review this, though, because I don't read this type of stuff very much, I doubt I will be able to help you a lot. If ...

Hi Cio, do you like the site so far? I hope you do! Alright, so, this first chapter, but like all pieces of writing it can be improved! I only ...

I'm not exactly sure how to move on from this. How are we supposed to fight things we can't see..? maybe you could give us a bit of a storyline...?

Hi ilovetowrite! I'm glad to see you have posted! I liked this, but like all writing it can be improved! : ) O.K. so, I think the biggest problem with ...

Hi emmy. First I would like to say that you should probably split this into two parts. It is very large and people have busy lives. The sheer amount of ...

Hey Jelly! I really don't have a ton of nitpicks about these. I feel like I could learn from you! I love how you played with the angles. Your close-up ...

Hi again Shorty! Like Halogirl said you shouldn't give your description in big clumps like that. Giving info dumps is just annoying and confusing to the reader. We won't be ...

Hi Shorty! First I would like to say that your avvie is awesome. We seem to have the same taste in music. XD The second thing I noticed was that ...

D: No Lavvi don't leave us!

See, I would like rosey's post, but that would just ruin the fun. XD

was pinker than

Olivia Brown I stayed near the back as we walked. Something was wrong. Something felt missing. We should go back to that old clearing. My feet weren't tingling to go ...

Whenever I try to write a novel I never end up finishing even the first draft. I am taking a break from them for a while.

By then it was too late.

I jumped and then I fell.