Calligraphy

A door shut, a lock clicked, some questions arose Writing on air, something Belle did compose I would like more description on what she composed. I know the man didn't ...

This is a good poem. But I love all your poems Esther. You always work rhymes in just the right way. General comments: Life is going well for you, but ...

Lets just say it is .... 12:00. You can skip ahead until it all slows down though. A. S.

Well, this poem is very.... odd, and for some reason I feel like you had writers block when you wrote it. General comments: Lina Malina won't talk to me, She's ...

And with the wind are gone Dance of fire These two lines make no sense to me. Overall I feel as if you wrote two lines at a time to ...

Just to let you know I didn't read the short story. General comments: Floating. Fast and Aimless. I never really pictured a black hole as fast more just nothingness. Conserving. ...

Hey, I am going to wait until you re-write this before I review, because at the moment all that I could have said has been said. To everyone else I ...

Granted, but it makes you sick and you die a slow and painful death of starvation, because after you eat the pickle you can't keep anything down not even if ...

Joseph From day one, I knew you were something special. The truth spoke through your eyes. It taught my me confidence, It showed me truth. hmmmm so the truth in ...

Love: Love leaves scars to learn from; This does make way more sense, sorry. love leaves care to open. Love gives hope to believe in , love delivers a key ...

Dear God, Once upon a time, This line is really unneeded and does not give the fairy tail affect you were going for. There was a girl And she was ...

You guys are doing great! I can't remember did you eat the rabbit? Even so you will still need food. A. S.

Granted, but of course your wish is corrupted. (does that make sense?) I wish that I didn't have to sleep, but still could if I wanted. I would have so ...

Oh thanks so much guys one, two, ... five reviews to read! Well, I better get started thanks for all the help! A. S.

oooooh YAY I get to be first! Will you please (please, please, pleeeeease) review my short story Coat Of Many Colors. (Possibly by the 14?) Thanks, A. S.