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Re: Fire
fire bright inferno or dull flicker Catches the eye won’t let go it dances and laughs and spreads its ecstasy but somesay its joy is dangerous and painful and treacherous ...
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Re: Affection
Short, sweet, and to the point, I love it. I actually don't like really long epic poems. I have a short attention plan. I think it had a good rhythm, ...
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Re: (insert generic, meek greeting here)
Hey, I'm callaticgirl, but if you want to address me by a more traditional name, call me Calla. I love books and I read alot. I mean ALOT. I love ...
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Re: Hazy Days
Your use of figurative language is very good, I especially like this part, "Shooting stars pour onto us, Forming a garden between our footsteps. " This is a very surreal ...
Dec 19, 2007
