Calla

This was actually a really nice price, but it's kinda boring in all honestly. I was almost through an didn't want to keep reading. While the story line is there ...

Hey! I'm really liking this so far. There are many grammar and/ typing mistakes. But the story line is good and you don't loose track of time. Later on I ...

Wow that was amazing! You used so much imagery and feeling that I felt like I was watching them. I was in the edge of my seat the entire time! ...

Wow, this is a really awesome and creative short story! The only thing I found was one spelling mistake. You've spelled demon wrong unless you meant to for creative reasons. ...

This is a very sentimental piece and I like it very much. But be careful because you have a lot of run on sentences that are not quite making sense ...

This is really dark! But I like it a lot! If I didn't know you in real life I'd say you were a really religious Christian. There are no grammer ...

Wow, that's surprisingly disturbing... yet pretty good! I noticed quite a few tense errors where it would switch from past to present in the beginning. "It had been eight months ...