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  • Short Story » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Smiling Man

    This was actually a really nice price, but it's kinda boring in all honestly. I was almost through an didn't want to keep reading. While the story line is there ...

    May 13, 2013

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural
    Re: Losing Control chapter two part one

    Hey! I'm really liking this so far. There are many grammar and/ typing mistakes. But the story line is good and you don't loose track of time. Later on I ...

    May 10, 2013

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Eventide

    Wow that was amazing! You used so much imagery and feeling that I felt like I was watching them. I was in the edge of my seat the entire time! ...

    May 1, 2013

  • Short Story » Supernatural, Spiritual
    Re: When Souls Become Demonic

    Wow, this is a really awesome and creative short story! The only thing I found was one spelling mistake. You've spelled demon wrong unless you meant to for creative reasons. ...

    May 1, 2013

  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Mangoes and Strawberries

    This is a very sentimental piece and I like it very much. But be careful because you have a lot of run on sentences that are not quite making sense ...

    May 1, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: What's Unseen By Many

    This is really dark! But I like it a lot! If I didn't know you in real life I'd say you were a really religious Christian. There are no grammer ...

    Mar 7, 2013

  • Short Story » Horror, General
    Re: Pop goes the weasel

    Wow, that's surprisingly disturbing... yet pretty good! I noticed quite a few tense errors where it would switch from past to present in the beginning. "It had been eight months ...

    Feb 21, 2013

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