Calibur

Yes I agree that is a big flaw in my story. I'm doing some serious revising on my story based on everyones advice so the new and improved version will ...

okay guys thanks.

Thanks you guys very much for the advice I've been looking for a site to help teach me how to write better but no luck yet do you know of ...

I understand what you mean but i'm just now starting to write stories so i'm not going to be as good as everybody here but if you did continue to ...

I myself am a christian and I completely go against the article. In the christian religion it dosen't matter what you read as long as you stay faith full to ...

I agree if she wants to give her characters weapons let her give her characters weapons.

The storyline is very interesting and detailed everyone has handled the advice that needs to be given so i won't bother to.

Hello as you can see i'm new here and i'm new to writing I normally write and draw comic books and have decided to take on writing books as well. ...