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  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Destiny -- A Harry Potter short story

    Hello This was fairly-well written and I would be interested in seeing what would happen afterwards. The style was fairly appropriate but strangely passive in my opinion for Hermione. I ...

    Jun 29, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Elements chapter 1

    Hello The other reviewers have already said quite a lot, haven't they? My only additional suggestion would be to inject a sense of 'action' into the story. There is more ...

    Jun 29, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Author's Fantasy

    Hello The whole piece has a very loose, introspective feel to it. However, the first half of the story (aliens) does not connect readily to Maro. Some more plot is ...

    Jun 29, 2008


This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
— Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy