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Thanks, both of you ^^ I'll be taking into consideration what you said, and I think maybe not have my character start training from age three but five, as Rosey ...

Thanks, ED. That will be done. Although, you seem to have overlooked the 'From Hell' bit. It's meant to be not quite believable, superhuman, but not so unbelievable that it ...

If you have a character that has been training (I assume this is military training, not playing the harpsichord) since three years old, any sort of realism already goes out ...

So. A character is thirteen years old, and not human, though humanoid. He's been undergoing physical training since he was three, and now, has been shipped off to the Old ...

Well, I might help. Try Blood of the Dragon, by Nox Arcana, of the album Blood of the Dragon. Actually, check all the songs out, they make for great stories.

Uuuh.... I understand a JM has been here and not pointed this out, so I'm obviously mistaken. Shouldn't be this is the Writing Tips forum? Or whatever that one forum ...

Yes! And whoa, Rosey, that's a lot of reviews you have.

And will the reviews you've done in the meanwhile count?

Mine- simple, actually. 'Italian' is because I'm Italian, 'Illuminist' is because I adore that period. Also because I (hush, it's a secret) would have loved to be considered one. :D

Well, as my mind can never concentrate on one story for more than a couple of days, I came up with another idea which I think sounds promising, but I'd ...

Perhaps do away with the exclamation mark. In my humble opinion ( :D ) it makes things rather sillier than what had been intended.

Personally, I love stories where the villain is the MC or POV. I feel villains- their motives, drives and approach to life in general- are much more interesting than the ...