Caerulean

You've read the previous chapters already?? xD Thanks! I'll try writing Chapter 6 as early as I can. School comes close here >.

Why is this in the Romantic Novels? This story ends soon lol. Anyway, guys, I need your reviews, please! :D

Just to clarify things, I'm still taking in the reviews and comments you give me so...please, don't take this the wrong way, okay? :D

Like what I replied to my other poem, thanks for the reviews! It makes me feel guilty that you guys give creative comments but in the end, I'm not gonna ...

Thanks for the reviews guys! I'm not really a poet or a poem-writer and I just wrote this (just like what I said) for English so I didn't put so ...

I need reviews before I could post the next chapter, guys. Thanks and sorry for the very late post.

Hi. I usually don't read long pieces, but you had no reviews! I assume that you have already handed it in to your teacher, but perhaps you will rewrite this ...

I really have no idea if my Archaic English here is correct and the ending was hurried. Anyways, we were told to make a story with a minimum of 5 ...

I liked it; it had British characters rather than the Americans everywhere (no offense to any Americans). However, I dunno. Where is Haniel from? She doesn't talk like a modern ...

Hi Whisperer, Thanks for messaging me to clear this up. I obviously misinterpreted your previous comments - I felt like you were reacting defensively to my criticisms and accusing me ...

Hi Whisperer, When reviewers give you their time and effort for free in the hope of helping you improve, the appropriate response is "Thank you", regardless of whether you agree ...

To Karsten: I actually have problems with some reviewers here lol. The first paragraph is supposed to be blank and vague, leaving readers lost in a black screen, with nothing ...

There were a couple of errors like grammatical. You're going to have to proofread but i see potential without the errors. Just always proofread. Thanks! Your review is so short. ...

replies/reviews...Anyways, it might take some time before I get the chance to make he fourth chapter. Till next time, adieu!

This post was no longer in the first pages and no one has reviewed or commented yet...Please, I need reviews!