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Re: Notice me, then love.
Hi there. :) I'm confused by your spoiler. You don't want the reviewers to comment about punctuation or did you mean that you wouldn't mind comments about punctuation? o.o Anyway, ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Demon Dancer
Hello there. :) First of all, the title is interesting but it seems unfitting for the poem 'cause the dancer's not the demon. Anyway... Nitpicks: At first it was a ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: I take it all back.
Hello there. :) Nitpicks: Anything anyone does - I think there should be a comma after 'Anything'. No matter what happens. I'll love you forever. - It should be a ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: The Panic Attacks
Hello there. :) Nitpicks: Alone, truely alone - 'truly' is not spelled with an 'e'. Tragically awaiting the nonexistant end - It's 'nonexistent'. Oh, immortal vexation - Since you seem ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Not Free
Hello. :) I've got only two nitpicks for you: I can fly But I'm not free - o.o I think the contradiction there is interesting. Anyway, this beginning feels quick. ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Dismay
Hello there. :) Nitpicks: All my efforts gone to waste, everything seems pointless. - I think it should be a period, a dash, or a semi-colon after 'waste'. I struggle ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: echoes
Hello there, Azila. :) Nitpicks: (one two three two one) - I think there should be commas in between the numbers. in a house by the river - I think ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Uh... hello?
lol I know Kim Possible and Disney Channel xD. I was asking about the rat. Anyway, I don't think people should shave cats down to their skin. >.
May 31, 2011 -
Re: The Power of Love and Family
Hello there. :) This review isn't finished 'cause this short story is REALLY LONG lol. I'm just gonna make another review when I finish reading the story. Well, get read ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Death's hand
Hello, tinkembell. ^_^ :) ♪♫ tinkembell, tinkembell, tinkem all the way~ ♫♪ Ehem. Nitpicks: In the silent darkness, that blanketed the night, - I think the comma after 'darkness' is ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Uh... hello?
Kim Possible Disney what?
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Diary of a Lost Soul
Hello there. ^_^ Congrats on the featured work! :smt023 Nitpicks: And, you always kept your promises. - You shouldn't put a comma after a coordinating conjunction when it begins the ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Rainy Day
Hello there. :) Congrats on the featured work. ^_^ Nitpicks: It is raining Steady and consistent I am alone Safe and consistent - Really good opening. ;) I lean back ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Casting shadows
Hello. :) Nice title. Nitpicks: sitting up there all alone. - This is too short for the lengthy line that came before it. Maybe, change 'all' with 'completely'. so pale, ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Uh... hello?
NO! D: Poor kittens... (xD)
May 30, 2011