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Re: URGENT! Animals Missing From Your Area!
I'm so gonna post this on FB. Those poor things... :(
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Blind
Hello there! Whisperer here. :) That's a really nice poem! :) The imagery is nice and the meaning is great! The rhyming wasn't that great though but it was good. ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Falling Stars
Hello there. :) Honestly, I read this because the title is the same with David Archuleta's song. xD Anyway, I've got nitpicks for you: We walked through the trails in ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Sneak Peek at YWS Renovation
There's only one thing that I can say: We are lucky - no - blessed to have Nate as our administrator. :D
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Troubled Sage and Sweet Caroline 0.3
Hello there. :) First review. ^_^ Nitpicks: I had used the balcony to climb up from when I got up there. - I'm not certain of how you can rewrite ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: You Found Me
Sol, Sol, Sol, Sol! *tune of Beethoven's Symphony No. 5* xD :D I am here to give thee a review! Nitpicks: It was just sequences, figures and numbers, hypothesis and ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Hear O Hear My Un-blissful Whispers
Hear O Hear My Un-blissful Whispers Will anyone understand this ‘problem’ that I have? It’s really annoying, so exasperating, and very frustrating to be experiencing this for this long already. ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: I wish
Hello there. :) Nitpicks: I wish I could go back to when I was a child, to when I felt at ease with this world. - This is a clich� ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Ambivalence
Hello, Sol! ^_^ :) First review! xD Nitpicks: I had feared my fears for so long, but ambivalence conquered my heart. - Nice lines. ^_^ I lost so much, yet ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Are You Still Mine?
NOTE: This is my first time writing anything with a girl's perspective so please bear with me xD. *Song - - - - - - - - Are You Still ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Actual Society
Parents do not raise their children, society does. Unless the parents came from a different society xP, they will have to mix their 'culture' with the one they are in ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: On Rowboats and Trees
Hello there. :) Nitpicks: with sand under my tongue and waves breaking in my ears. - Nice imagery here. :) and say I’m happy here — - I think it's ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Separate Lives
Hello there :) Nitpicks: I wish I could just place you at my back, - It supposed to be 'on' and not 'at my back'. Pack all the moments and ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Uh... hello?
But hair grows!
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Uh... hello?
Oh, right! I do remember him. XD
May 31, 2011
