-
Re: Whisperer
Oh lol. Just please tell me if you like my works :D. Anyways... Fave Ice Cream Flavors: Cookies & Cream, Pistachio (Did I spell that right?) Music: Pop, Pop Rock, ...
Sep 3, 2009 -
Re: Whisperer
Hello, everyone! This is actually my first time in these forums and I don't know if this topic should be here. Anyways, I'm Nathaniel Louis Abogado from the Philippines. It ...
Aug 26, 2009 -
Re: The Inch - The Full Story - Chapter 3
replies/reviews...Anyways, it might take some time before I get the chance to make he fourth chapter. Till next time, adieu!
Aug 26, 2009 -
Re: 12 Roses
This is something catchy and I think you are excited of posting your idea on the site and receiving remarks but you should have included Chapter 1 in the same ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: The Inch - The Full Story - Chapter 3
The Inch The ball was over, and I was standing near the hall’s main door, which was where the guests took their exit. My mind was occupied with staring at ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Strange love
Nice work. I could slightly relate with the story. (But, I never lost feelings for her) Anyways, I don't actually think that you have to name or describe your characters ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Crust
Uh...I just noticed some errors that are not really a big deal. First, the 'blooddrunk' thing - Shouldn't it be 'blood-drunk'? Note the dash in between. Also, the capitalization/ I ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Whoever taught you how to dance?
This poem is good and powerful! Sorry if my skills for criticizing aren't really good. I barely review another person's work with lots of words, like I almost everyone here ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: The Inch - The Full Story - Chapter 2
This post was no longer in the first pages and no one has reviewed or commented yet...Please, I need reviews!
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: The Inch - The Full Story - Chapter 2
The Inch “Elina,” I recited her name. I was lying down on my simple white bed, looking at the ceiling, hugging a white pillow with my right arm upon my ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: The Inch - The Full Story - Chapter 1
I hurriedly edited this. Please read and review. Since you guys say that Chapter 1 is so short, I decided to add one more scene. I also added some words ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: The Inch - The Full Story - Chapter 1
Thanks for the comments! I already revised it. I hurried the chapter when I was making it last night, anyway.
Jul 8, 2009 -
Re: The Inch - The Full Story - Chapter 1
The Inch There is no one else. There is only I and my love who can tell our story – Our love story. Wouldst it be in Archaic English or ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: The Inch
The story was meant to be short and cut and have less details because it's just to accompany the song. For those who want more details, wait and I'll be ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: The Inch
Hey! I really like this (: I think it's quite a refreshing idea to write something like this, because I've never read a piece like this one on YWS. I ...
Jul 4, 2009
