Caerulean

I was supposed to post this for the 9th Event but I didn't make it to the due date so I'm just posting it here and so that my work ...

Uh...You have some grammatical errors. But, otherwise, this is great! This piece justified the reason why I prefer reading Dramatic Poetry here in YWS. - - - - - - ...

I'm gonna comment on this part... “Stop that already, I know." Shouldn't 'I know' be separated from 'Stop that already'? Anyway, with the use of 'damsel', it seemed like it ...

I need reviews before I could post the next chapter, guys. Thanks and sorry for the very late post.

Hello, guys! I remember when I was posting my 'Elemental Dragons' (which was unfinished) years ago. I forgot when, though (lol!). Now, I promised myself I'm gonna finish 'The Inch' ...

The Inch Chapter 4 – Eavesdropping I finally kept my violin inside the case which I found lying on a desk at the hind part of the stage, and I ...

Hi. I usually don't read long pieces, but you had no reviews! I assume that you have already handed it in to your teacher, but perhaps you will rewrite this ...

I really have no idea if my Archaic English here is correct and the ending was hurried. Anyways, we were told to make a story with a minimum of 5 ...

“The Beggar” Long ago, the twin Limshanks princes of Hallus Kingdom married the twin Dirailla princesses of Emephina Kingdom. They have lived happily and lavishly and their status in the ...

I liked it; it had British characters rather than the Americans everywhere (no offense to any Americans). However, I dunno. Where is Haniel from? She doesn't talk like a modern ...

Hi Whisperer, Thanks for messaging me to clear this up. I obviously misinterpreted your previous comments - I felt like you were reacting defensively to my criticisms and accusing me ...

Hi Whisperer, When reviewers give you their time and effort for free in the hope of helping you improve, the appropriate response is "Thank you", regardless of whether you agree ...

To Karsten: I actually have problems with some reviewers here lol. The first paragraph is supposed to be blank and vague, leaving readers lost in a black screen, with nothing ...

There were a couple of errors like grammatical. You're going to have to proofread but i see potential without the errors. Just always proofread. Thanks! Your review is so short. ...

Ooh...lol It's alright, by the way.