Caerulean

That was really intriguing! Nice poem! :) I just hope every atheist would be as good as the character in your poem. >.

The Inch Chapter 6 – Farewell “Elina?” a familiar man’s voice called, “Elina!” Surprise struck both me and Elina when we heard the voice. “That’s my father,” said the girl ...

The other reviewers already commented on the 'mistakes' part so all I'm gonna say is that I can't connect the first chapter to this chapter. It was like a totally ...

Hi, Solvalery! I read this chapter as you requested. I also skimmed the previous reviews quickly and, as far as I've read, they're right. Anyway, I don't really like quoting ...

You've read the previous chapters already?? xD Thanks! I'll try writing Chapter 6 as early as I can. School comes close here >.

Why is this in the Romantic Novels? This story ends soon lol. Anyway, guys, I need your reviews, please! :D

Okay. The only problems left is that you didn't use commas on some parts of the story and that you didn't put spaces in between some parts too. (xD) "Exhausted ...

Ooh! This is really inspirational (xD)! I noticed one thing though: "Voices of kids out walking dogs". I didn't get that part. Did you make a mistake or something? Anyway, ...

The Inch Chapter 5 – Secrecies It had been a year after and I still wasn’t able to ask Elina about what I heard – the most extravagant marriage to ...

Just to clarify things, I'm still taking in the reviews and comments you give me so...please, don't take this the wrong way, okay? :D

Like what I replied to my other poem, thanks for the reviews! It makes me feel guilty that you guys give creative comments but in the end, I'm not gonna ...

Thanks for the reviews guys! I'm not really a poet or a poem-writer and I just wrote this (just like what I said) for English so I didn't put so ...

This is a fine story but you have a couple of minor grammatical errors and I'm gonna mention a few of them even though you said that you don't care ...

This is one of the poems I wrote for our English subject. - - - - - - - I look at the screen for things to do Trying to ...

This is one of the poems I wrote for our English subject. - - - - - - - I slowly stood up and gave this to thee – This ...