Caerulean

Thanks for all the reviews! I have edited this according to your remarks already. :)

I hope you like it! Read and review! :D - - - - - - - Light and Shadow Prologue – The Twins There is no darkness. There is only ...

First! :D xD Nitpicks: As I rested my cheek against Luke’s hard chest I wanted so bad just to disappear. - Put a comma after 'chest'. Once we returned home ...

Hey, Pink :D. Here I am again... Nitpicks: He never told me or her but I could tell you know? - Put a comma before between 'tell' and 'you'. brother's ...

Nitpicks! I had fought, I had tried my best and I made countless mistakes but now, I was out of breath. - I think you can/should put a period after ...

Hiya, Thanks for the reviews guys! I went back and edited the things you mentioned. Imaginemymind: Thanks for reading! I'm glad to have another supporter. :3 *rubs hands together* Hunter ...

Darn. I want to call!! But, why does it have to be so early here in the Philippines? 6 am >.< . And, I have classes that day...

Hey there, Pink! :D Awesome chapter! Nitpicks: She let out breath and walked up to me. - Should be: She let out a breath and walked up to me. I ...

Nitpicks! xD I actually had some fun doing these nitpicks haha :D. don’t get too work up, sweetheart.” I guess this should be: don't get too worked up, sweetheart." would ...

Hey! :) Thanks for sending me a message! Ooh, I'm the first one to review! XD She knew exactly how irritate me better than anyone else. - Should be: She ...

Hi, Pink! XD Okay, so here I go: The beginning seemed a bit hurried. It kinda reminded me of the very first paragraphs I used as an introduction for the ...

This review is quite hurried 'cause it's nearly midnight here! XD Anyway, I skimmed the reviews and I think the parts I'm going to nit-pick weren't commented on yet. Anyway, ...

Darn. My problem with making a review is that I forget the parts in the story which I have to quote but since I can't find them again, I'll just ...

Thanks for reading and commenting, Zankoku :D. I really appreciate it :D. Anyway, I changed some of the verbal words to 'said' to reduce the so-much-being-descriptive thingy lol. I hope ...

Thanks for all the comments :D ! Anyway, I just hope there are other readers who would comment too :D xD