Caerulean

Whew! I finally finished writing this! xD :D It's been a long time since I wrote my last songfic (which is my first). Anyway, I used a LOT from my ...

Haha, cool idea! :D - - - - - - - Filipino: 2 Scottish: 1 English: 2 American: 3 Asian: 1 Finnish: 1 Canadian: 1 Indian: 1 South African: 1 ...

Nice poem! :) This is my 2nd review for this month's Review Day but, unfortunately, it will be short >_

I totally agree with Aussie about this. This leaves the readers to nothing. It gives the readers nothing. And, it tells the readers nothing except this seemingly endless sex scene. ...

Hi there! :D I'm here to make a review on a work of yours just like you asked me to. :) First of all, I think this should be called ...

Hey, Pink! Here I am again! Well, I actually have nothing to say but this is really a good chapter and in general, this is an excellent story! :D Anyway, ...

:D Haha, I was like 'Whoah! You really don't need me to review this XD'. The others have already caught a lot of things and I don't think my nitpicking ...

Whew! It's been so long since I last posted a chapter of this story. I hope you like this one. :D - - - - - - - Chapter 4 ...

Umm...The other reviews actually felt harsh even though I'm not the writer of this poem. Anyway, sorry but I'll have to give another negative review. I don't have much experience ...

This is really an excellent poem :D. Like the other reviews, there is nothing much to say. The message is clear and the rhyming is epic xD. If I am ...

Chapter 3 – Unbreakable Intimacy When there is no light, shadow becomes darkness. - Escuridion, the Lord of Shadow The morning came, and Xombreil was there, lying on his bed ...

Woot! A new chapter is up! (I wonder when I'll get to finish mine...) Anyway, nitpicks! Groaning, I slid my finger between my strands of hair. - It seems better ...

Whoah. This was a really long chapter! I noticed a lot more things too...some are probably mentioned by the other reviewers already but I'm too lazy too cut them off ...

Chapter 2 – New Things will never stay the same and soon, we shall realize it. - Avicrus, the Lord of Light The world of Neitheris had kept on spinning ...

Hey, Pink! Don't lose interest. :) That can cause you to write unenthusiastically or run out of ideas just like what happened with my other story that I was writing ...