Caerulean

Umm, hello. :) I was wondering if you'd like to review my work which is entitled 'Light and Shadow'. Here's the first chapter - I have written and posted 5 ...

Oh, by the way, I forgot to say that you seemed to have used a lot of adverbs in this chapter. They say that a lot of adverbs makes the ...

Yay, new chapter! :D Nitpicks: (Maybe, the other reviewers have already caught these but, oh well...) Her steps echo off the walls and she wearing her scrubs with a white ...

Hey, wasabey!! :D Another poem of yours got featured again! You're awesome! XD By the way, the poem is nice. :) There were some parts that sounded a little bit ...

Hey there, Skins! :D I'm here. :) Nitpicks: What would he say if anyone came in? I just wanted to check the windowsill for mould and dead bugs? He certainly ...

I have one word for you: Wow. This is really a great poem and I'm lovin' it xD. The message is epic. :D *thumbs up all the way to Heaven* ...

Haha, this is really cool! I love jingles xD (I mean songs that are changed for school programs or something). :D I sang from the beginning to the chorus part ...

Ooh, that's a very nice poem! :D I didn't catch anything that needs to be fixed. The thing I noticed is that when I first read it, it seemed to ...

Hey, Skins! :D I read this because it is featured lol and now, I'm finally making a review. xD Nitpicks: In another room, there was a red haired woman... - ...

Ooh, cool poem! :D I love it! xD And, it's in acrostics! Epic cool! :D lol (I'm so exaggerating XD) :D

Woot! Finally, a new chapter is up! :D So here I go again xD. Nitpicks: “Can you meet me, at the park?” - I think an ellipsis is more preferable ...

Nice, Sol! Another poem of yours is featured! Yay you :D xD! I'm not good with reviewing poems so I'll just say that I like this poem. :) I like ...

Whew! I probably finished this! >_< Please review :D.

Chapter 5 – Revelation and Separation There are things that cannot stay together. - Escuridion, the Lord of Shadow Splashes of cool water hit both Eluna and Xombreil’s faces as ...

Cool! Your poem got featured! xD :D Anyway, I wouldn't comment much because the others had already caught a lot of things. I'm just here to say that I like ...