Caerulean

Hey there. :) I didn't think that you'd really make a continuation since the first one was posted in Romantic Short Stories. lol Anyway, I've got nitpicks for you: He ...

lol at Meep's comment. :D Awesomesaucce, I love it! xD Anyway, wow, I didn't realize that you're such an epic artist! *claps hands* That is a handsome Captain Jack Sparrow ...

Maybe it was maybe it wasn’t, we will - I suggest putting a comma after 'Maybe it was', or maybe a period. I noticed a few other missing punctuations but ...

Wow, this is really epic! :D It was totally fun to read. Nitpicks/Comments: But I liked it. No, no I didn’t. Yes, yes I did. Oh for God’s sake! - ...

Hi! I've got some nitpicks for you: and looses its meaning. - Typo: 'loses' Your eyes,when you look at me - You forgot to put a space after the comma. ...

Hey. This is the part two of my review. lol xD This is for the 2nd part of the chapter. :D Nitpicks: Sion may have been there, but the day ...

Hey, there! :D So, here we go again. Nitpicks: ...yakking as his several chins vibrated. - 'several chins'? “You will have a ten minute brake at eleven..." - I think, ...

I've finally made a club for this novel! Join to get updated! - - - - - - - - Chapter 6 - Truth The truth shall set you free. ...

Gosh. Thanks for all the positive comments. :D I didn't expect them. xD Like what I said in the poem, I'm not really good at writing poems. By the way, ...

If I would take this seriously, I would mention the mistakes I noticed. But, since this is the Cute War of the Ages, I'll let it through xD. :D This ...

I can’t see what’s wrong But I am not blind. I’ve noticed this for so long That it cannot be denied. These words you are saying Don’t really make that ...

You did an epic job with this poem and I'm loving the last 2 lines! :D - But maybe even the moon, Has reasons to die. Anyway, here we go: ...

Yay! New chapter! :D Nitpicks: “He’s talking to a friend. He’ll be here in minute.” - You forgot to put 'a' before 'minute'. I flicked my eyes to the tall ...

Ooh. The first reviewer was quite harsh xD. I don't know if I should really agree with him 'cause I'm not really good at commenting on poems and I'm not ...

o.o The first time I read this, I was like 'Whoah.' You've got a lot of vocabulary in you. I didn't understand the poem xD. But then, when I read ...