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Re: As if I Never Existed
That was a nice poem. ^_^ :D I like the simplicity of it and how it is direct to the point. And you did a good job making me feel ...
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: Move With Godspeed
So...this is the result of me wanting to write something even though I'm not inspired. >.< I hope it makes sense though. :D - - - - - - - ...
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: If I Were a DC Writer [NOW AVAILABLE ON ITUNES]
That is really a great song! (I didn't read the lyrics though xD. I just watched the vid) The video is great too! There's so much effort that's put into ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Piano Boy
Hi there! :D That is really a beautiful poem! ^_^ Nitpicks: Sing the chorus to your song, piano boy, - Perhaps, it is more correct if you used 'of' instead ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: The Answer
UPDATE: I recorded the song now. :D - "The Answer" It couldn't be just a greeting card for you You know it has something that I wanted to tell you ...
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: The difference of wings
Hi, Pink! :D Nice drawing you've got there! Anyway, can you believe that I've got nitpicks for you? Haha! :D (Well, I couldn't actually lol.) Here we go: Lower Angel ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Mr.Silence Must Die
(OMG! WHERE DID MY REVIEW GO!? DARN THIS INTERNET CONNECTION! >.< Good thing my browser remembered most of my review!) Hi, Sol! ^_^ :D Nitpicks: So listen what I'm going ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: The Face of Fear
Hi! :D I'm sick of this now,how much shall I endure? - You forgot to put a space after the comma here. These people they watch, they point, and they ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Trying to Define Art
This is something a poor reader like me wouldn't understand. >.< It's rather exaggerated and quick. It's like an explosion to me, as simple as that - a quick literary ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Is this love?
Hi there. :) You write poems fast xD. Nitpicks: You are struck from behind, by none other than cupid. - I don't think there should be a comma after 'behind'. ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: To The Shore
Another great story by Pink! I mean, dad. XD :D Nitpicks: If evening tides could wash away all your worries, would you let me take your hand and walk you ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: Corazón
Oh my gosh. I love this! This is what I call poetry! xD It's so beautiful! :D And I can feel the words just by reading it! Yet, you didn't ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: Begin.
For me, this is high poetry - I can't understand it It's filled with really poetic, beautiful words...Fine, I simply didn't understand it. lol I don't have the best vocabulary ...
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: Heart Cloud on Valentine's Day
I agree. It looks like a broken heart too, but it was most probably because it took me several seconds to take the shot and it was already deforming.
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH
FINALLY! I'M DONE READING THIS! :D Sorry for the major delay, twin. :) Nitpicks! : Next to it were two wooden doors – like wardrobe doors because of their flowery ...
Feb 15, 2011
