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Re: A Light Where There is Darkness
First of all: CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WORKS BEING FEATURED! :D You're making a feature spree! XD Anyway, nitpicks: all of it's secrets. as all gaze up at it's glory, it's ...
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Re: An Ode To Mathematics
If you remove the title, you can't pretty much tell that it's about Math XD. But I like it though. :) Keep it up! Maybe, it'll be better if it ...
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Re: My Whispers On the Ocean
Awesome job, man! Keep it up! :D I love how simple the words and yet, they show how deep the emotion is in the poem. My only problem is that ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Book Covers, Drawings'z ETC.
Nice! Your amazing! :D The girl in 'Sorry' looks like a ghost though. o.o (Sorry for the unhelpful review)
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Hand Painted Chair.
Amazing job! :D *thumbs up*
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: My Heaven, My Sun
Hello. :) Nitpicks: Wandering through an empty land, there's nothing here, silence is so quiet it sounds loud. - o.o Please rewrite this sentence. My heart bounces out of control.Oh, ...
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Re: The Voice In My Head
Hi! is this the first time I reviewed a work of yours? XD :D I didn't know you are a poet, haha. Nitpicks: The demon wailed, “He has a plan! ...
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Re: Morgan's Lullaby
Hello! ^_^ Nitpicks: There's more to tears than sadness, and there's more to life than death. - Cliché. But it doesn't matter 'cause it works here! :D So don't cry, ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Lies
Hello! ^_^ :D Nitpicks: Is there a blatant reason for your cruel, menacing lies? - Ooh, I love it! I love the emotion you put in these lines and how ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Avatar
Nice! :D I love them! Anyway, I prefer the 'good' one, but his body seems too tall for someone who's actually sitting. The 'evil' one doesn't have a problem of ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
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Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Adoption [Edited]
Wow. That is nice! ^_^ My problem is: I didn't really get it...like completely get it. There were confusing parts. Maybe, you could make it clearer? But I love the ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Picturesque
What I'm going to say is: We should grab the chance to take a picture of the picturesque things or sceneries we see. :) De La Salle University-Dasmariñas Man-made Lake ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Little Macey (0)
Hi there. ^_^ :D First of all, I've got a few nitpicks for you: If she moved they would get her. - Comma after 'moved' The black crack between the ...
Mar 3, 2011
