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Re: Bring it on! (Open)
Hi. :) You said that you're gonna review this so here's the link. :) -
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Moody Days That End in Y (Poetry Pair Contest)
Hello. :) (Uh...I don't know what else to say to begin this review. :lol:) Nitpicks: Today I need your company. - Comma after 'Today' A minute ago I wanted to ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Doodles #2
Hi, ehte! Your drawings are always good. ;) Comments: 1st drawing - I like this one the best. :) Negative points: I don't know what to say about the irony ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Parasite: The Corruptive Shadow - Chapter 1
Parasite: The Corruptive Shadow Chapter 1: Unexpected Darkness seemed to be untouched even though a life-changing incident was happening to me back then. Who would have thought that something like ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: The Haikus of The Periodic Table of Elements
OMG! Haha! :D Well, I've got some nitpicks for you: 7. Nitrogen Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! BOOM! - ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Little Macey (1)
Hey. :D I'm so sorry that I'm only able to review this late. >.< :( I was supposed to read and review it the day I read the update in ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Seth Xyrell the Lost
First of all, this came from the browser game, Magic Duel Adventure (http://magicduel.com), and I wrote this in the 'Comments on Self' of my character which is named Seth Xyrell. ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Perseverance Never Lies
Probably, it's just me but, the first time I read this, I was confused and didn't get to relate the poem with the title until the last time. o.o Stupid ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Rapunzel
My only comments on this are that her hair should be longer and that she should be smiling! XD :D Nevertheless, nice job! ^_^ Wait, wait, wait! Congratulations on being ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: I Can't Write
Nice! I like it. I like how realistic it is for writers or just people who are trying to write something, like homework or a school project or something. :) ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: I call
Ooh. This poem is interesting. :) Anyway, I've got only one nitpick for you: you - I think you should capitalize this...and also, to give more power to the word ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: A poem for Japan
This is SO much better than what I did. I'm so ashamed of what I (originally) wrote in my poem. T_T This deserves to get featured! It's very sympathetic. :) ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Japan
I feel so ashamed of myself right now. x_x The poem I wrote doesn't deserve to be featured. T_T It was very POORLY written and I'm sorry for that. I ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Doodles #1
O.o That version is a lot creepier! But that smile seems cute. XD Anyway, the penguin could've used more shading. I love it by the way. :D I recognized him ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Counting the Stars
I love reading featured works...'CAUSE HEY HARDLY EVER DISAPPOINT ME! :D ^_^ Nitpicks: For when I need a wish, I’ll have my fallen star. - Ooh, I love it! :D ...
Mar 12, 2011
