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Re: Dearly Beloved
RH! :D xD This is like the first time I read a work of yours and you impressed me! *standing o* :smt023 First, nitpicks: I am sitting right now in ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Those Times
The original 'The Inch' (songfic) - [Ending] Full story of 'The Inch' (came after the 'The Inch' songfic) - - - - - - - - Those Times - - ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Parasite: The Corruptive Shadow - Chapter 2
Rated 12+ for some sensitive/inappropriate parts Follow! - - - - - - - - Chapter 2: Captured The next day, I went home from school like nothing had happened, ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: A Blessing
Have you ever noticed, or recognized even, this blessing in ‘disguise’? Just…how long have you been in this site? And how long has it already been since you logged in ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Hi there. :) Nitpicks: Its just writing, they say Its much more than that - Correction: 'It's' That's much better, I murmmer - Correction: 'murmur' - Also, it's more correct ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Pull the Trigger
Hello. ^_^ :D First of all, it's the title that made me click that link. XD Nice title. :) Nitpicks: Is life ever really that bad that it needs to ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: All's My Fault
Hi, ehte. :) Sorry this took so long. >.< Nitpicks: Whom did her eyes search, in this vast ocean of vagabonds? - I don't think you need to put a ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Pizza
Hello. :) Nitpicks: “Papa can we go?” - Put a comma after 'Papa'. - Sol already mentioned this. Haha. :) Yeah it sucks to be me, - I think you ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: "F" = Failure
Hello. ^_^ Nitpicks: like a firework in July. - This is so unoriginal but I LOVE it! XD These troubled times, no ones’ to blame, - Correction: 'one's' But feelings ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Turning the Tables(1.1)
Hello, Shubhi. ^_^ Here I am as you requested. :) Nitpicks: (I've got a lot of nitpicks. >.< But this chapter is long! xD) I had lot on my mind... ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You
Hello. :D Catchy title. xD Sometimes seeing all of it is the highlight of my day. - I think you should put a comma after 'Sometimes'. I can see it ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Do not click this.
Hello. :) Nice title XD. a reason you clicked here, infact. - I think you should also just capitalize the first letter, like most of the lines. - Correction: 'in ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: So You Sailed Away
First of all, Sol, CONGRATS ON THE FEATURE! :D You did great! xD ;) Nitpicks: No, I know it's helpless. - I think 'No' and the rest of the sentence ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Nature art!!
OMG. O.O Wow! I don't wanna be constructive with this review. They're just really great shots! :D Very stunning ! Go sell them on iStock! They're worth a lot! Trust ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: My Aborted Child
Hi there! :D First of all, congrats on the featured work! Realistic works like this deserve to get featured! :D Well, maybe, not all lol. Anyway... Nitpicks: I met Michal ...
Apr 5, 2011
