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Caerulean

  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Dearly Beloved

    RH! :D xD This is like the first time I read a work of yours and you impressed me! *standing o* :smt023 First, nitpicks: I am sitting right now in ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Those Times

    The original 'The Inch' (songfic) - [Ending] Full story of 'The Inch' (came after the 'The Inch' songfic) - - - - - - - - Those Times - - ...

    Apr 30, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Parasite: The Corruptive Shadow - Chapter 2

    Rated 12+ for some sensitive/inappropriate parts Follow! - - - - - - - - Chapter 2: Captured The next day, I went home from school like nothing had happened, ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Blessing

    Have you ever noticed, or recognized even, this blessing in ‘disguise’? Just…how long have you been in this site? And how long has it already been since you logged in ...

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: deleted

    Hi there. :) Nitpicks: Its just writing, they say Its much more than that - Correction: 'It's' That's much better, I murmmer - Correction: 'murmur' - Also, it's more correct ...

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Pull the Trigger

    Hello. ^_^ :D First of all, it's the title that made me click that link. XD Nice title. :) Nitpicks: Is life ever really that bad that it needs to ...

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: All's My Fault

    Hi, ehte. :) Sorry this took so long. >.< Nitpicks: Whom did her eyes search, in this vast ocean of vagabonds? - I don't think you need to put a ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Pizza

    Hello. :) Nitpicks: “Papa can we go?” - Put a comma after 'Papa'. - Sol already mentioned this. Haha. :) Yeah it sucks to be me, - I think you ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: "F" = Failure

    Hello. ^_^ Nitpicks: like a firework in July. - This is so unoriginal but I LOVE it! XD These troubled times, no ones’ to blame, - Correction: 'one's' But feelings ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Turning the Tables(1.1)

    Hello, Shubhi. ^_^ Here I am as you requested. :) Nitpicks: (I've got a lot of nitpicks. >.< But this chapter is long! xD) I had lot on my mind... ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You

    Hello. :D Catchy title. xD Sometimes seeing all of it is the highlight of my day. - I think you should put a comma after 'Sometimes'. I can see it ...

    Apr 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Do not click this.

    Hello. :) Nice title XD. a reason you clicked here, infact. - I think you should also just capitalize the first letter, like most of the lines. - Correction: 'in ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: So You Sailed Away

    First of all, Sol, CONGRATS ON THE FEATURE! :D You did great! xD ;) Nitpicks: No, I know it's helpless. - I think 'No' and the rest of the sentence ...

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Nature art!!

    OMG. O.O Wow! I don't wanna be constructive with this review. They're just really great shots! :D Very stunning ! Go sell them on iStock! They're worth a lot! Trust ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My Aborted Child

    Hi there! :D First of all, congrats on the featured work! Realistic works like this deserve to get featured! :D Well, maybe, not all lol. Anyway... Nitpicks: I met Michal ...

    Apr 5, 2011


Think left and think right and think low and think high. Oh, the thinks you can think up if only you try!
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