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Re: Pictures
Nice pictures, Sol! :smt023 I never knew that you like photography too! XD :D I like the first one the best. :smt023 The flower being on top of the stump ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: A Phantom or Memory? (poem written by friend died recently)
I'm sorry for your friend. I hope he rests in peace. ^_^ Nitpicks: A memory, how can I be when no one remembers me? - I'm not sure if this ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Teenage Emergency
Hello there. :) First, I've got some nitpicks for you. Comments: Getting high and feeling low Cutting deep and breathing shallow - I specifically like these two lines. And pretending ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: falling
Hi there. :) Comments: Save me I’m falling - There should be a comma after 'me'. Guided by the hands of your heavy lies - I'm not sure if I ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Stalking My Stalker
You shouldn't have changed the title! You made it so obvious! lol XD
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Those Times
Thanks for all the reviews, guys, :D ^_^ especially for catching those things that I overlooked >_
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Stalking My Stalker
Hey, Sol. :) (If I was faster, this review was supposed to be the first lol xD) Nitpicks: Procrastinating watching T.V. - I think that there should be a comma ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Because I'm a Christian
Nice poem! ^_^ It is very true and pure and I can see nothing wrong with it. I hope all the other people in the world can get this message. ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Sincerely, Brain
This is totally brilliant! Amazing! I can't say anything else! :D :smt023 The title is catchy by the way. I've only one nitpick: Next time LISTEN - You should put ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Happy Birthday, Teenager
Hello there. :) Nitpicks: Happy Birthday, my child! You’re now officially a teen. And according to the public, you’re impulsive and obscene. - Nice beginning. It's engaging. but you're now ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Those Times
Uh...Where are the typos, guys? o.o
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Parasite: The Corruptive Shadow - Chapter 1
Fine. I missed that spot. XD :lol:
May 3, 2011 -
Re: The Art of Dying
Hello. :) Nitpicks: You knew you were in trouble when you stopped sweating. - I like this starting sentence. It pretty much makes the reader interested. You had finished off ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Adventures of Captain McAwesome Pants 2
Nitpicks: CLEVER BOOTS: There is a lot that you can do. There is the mall, the movies, go see a show. Look at me; I’m going to a modeling show ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Neurosis
I'm in the same page is the reviewers above. I didn't get it! XD But the wording is great. :) The problem with that though is I couldn't be sure ...
May 1, 2011
