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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Spider's Secret

    Hello there. :) First of all, that's a really nice title. :smt023 The picture is nice too and looks cool, especially the web covering that opening. The openings a little ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: True Love

    Hello there. :) Rudely speaking, the title (including the topic) is cliché. >.< I think you could've come up with a better title for this. Nitpicks: To be held by ...

    May 28, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Uh... hello?

    Ooh! Kittens are cute! :D xD

    May 28, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Magic of the Night Sky

    Hello. :) That is one interesting but simple title. xD Well, I think the first letters of 'night sky' should be capitalized. Nitpicks: The night sky expands over the world ...

    May 27, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Uh... hello?

    I actually have nothing much to say... I just feel left out because I rarely go here in the forums lol. Well, hi. :) (This is awkward~)

    May 27, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Influences

    Hello there. :) Short poems seem to have become a trend lately. xD Nitpicks: Flowing through your being, silently - Put a period after 'silently' since this is a full ...

    May 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Pretty Little Lucifer

    Hello there. :) I already saw this on the featured list like three days ago but didn't read 'cause I don't like the name in the title xD, but I ...

    May 26, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Polar Opposites

    Hello there. :) I'm not really experienced with visual art so I probably can't say anything constructive, but I gotta say that these works are nice. :) :smt023 I like ...

    May 26, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Faith.

    Hello there. :) I didn't expect that mine would be the first review lol. I added this on my reading list like two days ago. xD Nitpicks: Boom. Crash. Bang. ...

    May 25, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Autumn Stars

    Hello there. :) Nitpicks: I'm too cold you say and take your blankets to the couch. - Put a comma after 'cold' and 'say' - Also, I didn't get the ...

    May 25, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Peace

    Hello. :) I've got two nitpicks for you: from city noise - I think there should be a 'the' before 'city'. and the world, that is confused and puzzled. - ...

    May 25, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Just Breathe

    Hello there. :) Nitpicks: The the beast finds me. - Typo: You typed 'the' twice. I am out breath again, - You forgot to put 'of' after 'out'. my mind ...

    May 24, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Los photographias

    I like them. :) I like the third one the best. The sunlight effect on your face and on the picture is nice. :) And it can be your profile ...

    May 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Woman

    Hello there. :) Nitpicks: A creature of mystery, - I don't think the comma after 'mystery' is necessary. The separation of the lines, in my opinion, already create pause. A ...

    May 23, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I Don't Wanna Wear My Pants Anymore!

    Hello there! :D When I first read the title, I misread it and thought it was 'I Don't Wanna Hear My Pants Anymore!' XD Nitpicks: I bent over forwards, No ...

    May 23, 2011


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