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Re: The Spider's Secret
Hello there. :) First of all, that's a really nice title. :smt023 The picture is nice too and looks cool, especially the web covering that opening. The openings a little ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: True Love
Hello there. :) Rudely speaking, the title (including the topic) is cliché. >.< I think you could've come up with a better title for this. Nitpicks: To be held by ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Uh... hello?
Ooh! Kittens are cute! :D xD
May 28, 2011 -
Re: The Magic of the Night Sky
Hello. :) That is one interesting but simple title. xD Well, I think the first letters of 'night sky' should be capitalized. Nitpicks: The night sky expands over the world ...
May 27, 2011 -
Re: Uh... hello?
I actually have nothing much to say... I just feel left out because I rarely go here in the forums lol. Well, hi. :) (This is awkward~)
May 27, 2011 -
Re: Influences
Hello there. :) Short poems seem to have become a trend lately. xD Nitpicks: Flowing through your being, silently - Put a period after 'silently' since this is a full ...
May 27, 2011 -
Re: Pretty Little Lucifer
Hello there. :) I already saw this on the featured list like three days ago but didn't read 'cause I don't like the name in the title xD, but I ...
May 26, 2011 -
Re: Polar Opposites
Hello there. :) I'm not really experienced with visual art so I probably can't say anything constructive, but I gotta say that these works are nice. :) :smt023 I like ...
May 26, 2011 -
Re: Faith.
Hello there. :) I didn't expect that mine would be the first review lol. I added this on my reading list like two days ago. xD Nitpicks: Boom. Crash. Bang. ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Autumn Stars
Hello there. :) Nitpicks: I'm too cold you say and take your blankets to the couch. - Put a comma after 'cold' and 'say' - Also, I didn't get the ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Peace
Hello. :) I've got two nitpicks for you: from city noise - I think there should be a 'the' before 'city'. and the world, that is confused and puzzled. - ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Just Breathe
Hello there. :) Nitpicks: The the beast finds me. - Typo: You typed 'the' twice. I am out breath again, - You forgot to put 'of' after 'out'. my mind ...
May 24, 2011 -
Re: Los photographias
I like them. :) I like the third one the best. The sunlight effect on your face and on the picture is nice. :) And it can be your profile ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Woman
Hello there. :) Nitpicks: A creature of mystery, - I don't think the comma after 'mystery' is necessary. The separation of the lines, in my opinion, already create pause. A ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: I Don't Wanna Wear My Pants Anymore!
Hello there! :D When I first read the title, I misread it and thought it was 'I Don't Wanna Hear My Pants Anymore!' XD Nitpicks: I bent over forwards, No ...
May 23, 2011
