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Hey midnightsky, I'm definitely intrigued by this piece - as a standalone, it raises a handful of questions, and if you're intending to make it part of something longer, it ...

Hi, Fizz. This piece has some real gems of imagery, but I feel like they're a little buried at the moment, and there are a few things you could do ...

This is what happens when I spend all day arguing with a programming assignment, only to end up feeling no closer to completion than when I started. This is incomplete... ...

Hi, Fizz. This piece has some real gems of imagery, but I feel like they're a little buried at the moment, and there are a few things you could do ...

The beginning of this piece is quite brilliant. The first paragraph introduces us to some nice weirdness, dropping the oncoming apocalypse into an otherwise normal situation. The announcement is unexp

The abortion debate boils down to this: does a foetus count as a human being and, if so, do the rights of an unborn foetus outweigh those of the woman ...

Hey nutmegan, First up, I love the concept behind this piece. Emotion drugs are a very interesting concept, and there is a lot of room for you to play with ...

Hey Styxs, I have to say, I'm intrigued by this blob. Do you have plans for a longer story based on this? I think you could definitely build on it ...

When your eyes are stuck on the car in front, you're too tired to be driving. The skin beneath your eyes is purple, To match the top you're wearing. The ...

The first thing that hits me when I read through this is that you're changing tenses, not only within the story but within a single paragraph. You've start in the ...