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Ohh, #6 is sad :( that heartbreaking thing where it's so much easier to see positive qualities in other people than in yourself. I like that at the end we ...

This whole story is delightful and intriguing, I can't wait to see the rest :D I loove #3 and #8

cold nights in an empty bed i hold my hands too close to the heater it burns but i am more afraid of shivering Oh, I like this one! All ...

Thank you so much, alliyah! I'm so glad you like that progression, I thought I was being a bit self-indulgent leaving it in, because I wasn't convinced it worked, but ...

Sachi, you string words together so excellently. This one is my favourite so far, and not just because you managed to use "infrastructure" in a poem and make it sound ...

Until last year's NaPo, I didn't really write poetry! Then I was strongarmed into spending 30 days writing poems, and it turned out to be kind of fun. I still ...

AH! I totally have a rhyme scheme for April 5!

#7 You started to forget before I learnt to remember. (Your door key your handbag your passport. Your neighbours your address your grandson's name.) A hundred miles and a decade ...

I sure hope poems about writing poems count, otherwise half of my last year's NaPo is null and void :P I like all of these, unfinished as they may be. ...

#6 or, "All the People That'll Mean Something" number one is a whirlwind in rainbow Doc Martens who knocks down the walls if they're in the wrong place defender of ...

Wow, I really like #6 - an excellent metaphor. The image that forms in my mind is incredibly vivid, and a little bit scary.

Oooh. I love #6. These are all great so far. #5 really captures loss not just of a person, but of the things he knew - that "we think"!

Wow, 100 poems! And I thought 30 was tough... These are all pretty cool so far! I really like if you give a snake a strawberry - and puppers are ...

Aah, thank you, Dems & Cat! So glad you liked it! #5 Once, after the end, I cast off my melancholy blanket and went into town searching for sunlight to ...

Oh man, loose thoughts really hit me. My grandma suffered from dementia in her later years, and you've really captured the kind of existential anxiety that you get when you ...