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Cadi

Through the air, a CadiDragon, suddenly.

  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Hopes and Fears of a Sleeping Dragon

    #29 I'm leaving on a jet plane, in the sky above the rain, flying out there all alone, a big adventure on my own. I'm leaving on a jet plane; ...

    Apr 28, 2018
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Hopes and Fears of a Sleeping Dragon

    #28 or, Strangers Reading on the Tube The Cost of Living is A Tale of Love and Darkness and in a Nutshell , do any of us have what it ...

    Apr 27, 2018
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: desert rain

    you remind me of wicker baskets and strawberries and the heat I feel with my bare back to the concrete and the sun in my eyes You've got a whole ...

    Apr 26, 2018
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a conversation with shame at five in the morning

    please forgive me my smoke detector heart. i have lived in fire too long to not smell it on every horizon. I am behind and catching up on all your ...

    Apr 26, 2018
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: I'm Doing NaPo this Year Despite Being So Busy or So Help Me

    #5 has a great rhythm to it, and I love the bits of rhyme you've scattered through it. I particularly love: Lakes, the barely / silver slicks of blinding light. ...

    Apr 26, 2018
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Anomalouus

    #18 paints such a beautiful, glittering picture! I love the imagery of the celestial girl, drawing together an outfit from the skies!

    Apr 26, 2018
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Let us see...

    Ohh, I like #24 - it gives me kind of chills. It's like one part ghost story, one part illustration of a very hollow, empty kind of feeling, and that's ...

    Apr 26, 2018
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a garden of stars and cats

    #33 is seriously #relatable. Me, every single morning! Also, #28 is very cool! I love the shapes you've made with the letters, especially the "spiral"!

    Apr 26, 2018
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Hopes and Fears of a Sleeping Dragon

    #27 or, Space Whales Ahead, in the star-speckled void, all blackest black and sparkling, unseen until one sweeping fin, glacial - no, slower, slower than the speed of planets - ...

    Apr 26, 2018
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Hopes and Fears of a Sleeping Dragon

    #26 Twist away my paperskin and slice me up with your sharpest knife; I'll take hold of your eyes and wring out the tears, until you can't see the cuts. ...

    Apr 25, 2018
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: all the thoughts you wish weren't real

    I'm glad you've written some poems, even though you're not going to go for 30! The way I see it, any poems at all is basically a success. And I've ...

    Apr 25, 2018
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Hopes and Fears of a Sleeping Dragon

    #25 water on the window pane trickling rivulets of rain and on the air, a soft, sweet scent warm earth, made damp

    Apr 24, 2018
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Hopes and Fears of a Sleeping Dragon

    Thank you, Cat! (I love people, they're just so much hard work D: ) #24 I love this song it's bouncy and bright but the words are sad. You love ...

    Apr 23, 2018
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: streetlight devils

    Oooh, #20/Wanderlust is gorrrrgeous. So much beautiful fire imagery, and the repeated opening to the stanzas flows delightfully. If I could Like it more than once, I'd be mashing that ...

    Apr 22, 2018
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: twisted steel and broken spines

    Like alliyah, I really like getting to see the a/b versions of some of these - it's interesting to see you taking the same idea in two directions, and how ...

    Apr 22, 2018


When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
— LadyMysterio