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Re: Hopes and Fears of a Sleeping Dragon
#29 I'm leaving on a jet plane, in the sky above the rain, flying out there all alone, a big adventure on my own. I'm leaving on a jet plane; ...
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Re: Hopes and Fears of a Sleeping Dragon
#28 or, Strangers Reading on the Tube The Cost of Living is A Tale of Love and Darkness and in a Nutshell , do any of us have what it ...
Apr 27, 2018 -
Re: desert rain
you remind me of wicker baskets and strawberries and the heat I feel with my bare back to the concrete and the sun in my eyes You've got a whole ...
Apr 26, 2018 -
Re: a conversation with shame at five in the morning
please forgive me my smoke detector heart. i have lived in fire too long to not smell it on every horizon. I am behind and catching up on all your ...
Apr 26, 2018 -
Re: I'm Doing NaPo this Year Despite Being So Busy or So Help Me
#5 has a great rhythm to it, and I love the bits of rhyme you've scattered through it. I particularly love: Lakes, the barely / silver slicks of blinding light. ...
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Re: Anomalouus
#18 paints such a beautiful, glittering picture! I love the imagery of the celestial girl, drawing together an outfit from the skies!
Apr 26, 2018 -
Re: Let us see...
Ohh, I like #24 - it gives me kind of chills. It's like one part ghost story, one part illustration of a very hollow, empty kind of feeling, and that's ...
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Re: a garden of stars and cats
#33 is seriously #relatable. Me, every single morning! Also, #28 is very cool! I love the shapes you've made with the letters, especially the "spiral"!
Apr 26, 2018 -
Re: Hopes and Fears of a Sleeping Dragon
#27 or, Space Whales Ahead, in the star-speckled void, all blackest black and sparkling, unseen until one sweeping fin, glacial - no, slower, slower than the speed of planets - ...
Apr 26, 2018 -
Re: Hopes and Fears of a Sleeping Dragon
#26 Twist away my paperskin and slice me up with your sharpest knife; I'll take hold of your eyes and wring out the tears, until you can't see the cuts. ...
Apr 25, 2018 -
Re: all the thoughts you wish weren't real
I'm glad you've written some poems, even though you're not going to go for 30! The way I see it, any poems at all is basically a success. And I've ...
Apr 25, 2018 -
Re: Hopes and Fears of a Sleeping Dragon
#25 water on the window pane trickling rivulets of rain and on the air, a soft, sweet scent warm earth, made damp
Apr 24, 2018 -
Re: Hopes and Fears of a Sleeping Dragon
Thank you, Cat! (I love people, they're just so much hard work D: ) #24 I love this song it's bouncy and bright but the words are sad. You love ...
Apr 23, 2018 -
Re: streetlight devils
Oooh, #20/Wanderlust is gorrrrgeous. So much beautiful fire imagery, and the repeated opening to the stanzas flows delightfully. If I could Like it more than once, I'd be mashing that ...
Apr 22, 2018 -
Re: twisted steel and broken spines
Like alliyah, I really like getting to see the a/b versions of some of these - it's interesting to see you taking the same idea in two directions, and how ...
Apr 22, 2018
