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Oooh, good article, euclidean. What I've started doing is categorizing the parts of my critique--Imagery, Meaning, Diction, etc. I also find it helpful to go line-by-line or stanza-by-stanza when it's

Hey Misty! I really enjoyed this; you certainly have a talent for description and characterization. Exposition. I thought that the beginning dragged a little bit. Your sentences were very bland, ...

I didn't see Champ, but I did get some photos, two of which I'm posting here:

The rules of when to use who/whoever and whom/whomever are simple, but sadly, many writers and students struggle with these tricky little pronouns. In casual speech, we almost never use ...

I'm going to have to agree with Brad here. You have a lot of images here, a lot of words, but I'm still trying to find something more in it. ...

I changed the title. It was originally "The End of Summer". Cadium said that was boring, and I agreed. Thus this reflection is now named "A Taste of Coming Autumn". ...

I second Misty on everything. I thought this was a fairly well-written piece. Characterization. The characterization of these the sister was excellent, but I saw very little of the narrator. ...

I find this piece interesting, but not exactly poetic. The phrases are blunt, commanding; they seem like more of a stream-of-consciousness, slightly edited rant than a poem to me. It's ...

Ah, I know how you feel. School starts for me on Wednesday. :( and :). Imagery. I think the strongest part of this piece is your ability to translate the ...

The photo quality isn't the best, but I liked the way you set things up and the colors in the shot. I also liked that the second shot (Converse) was ...

I, like Clau, am having trouble with this. I think I know why... Meaning. In order to get your point across, you've first got to give the reader something to ...

Oh, I like it! Grammar and sentence structure. I remember: it was either yesterday or eternities ago My opinion is that "eternity" should rarely be made plural. I think you ...

I felt the ending was a little too abrupt. I think that the length is appropriate, but this left me very unsatisfied. Meaning. I think this is fairly straightforward. Maybe, ...

*labels with a big red stamp*: EMO ANGST POETRY. I completely agree with Snoink, melodicatastrophe, and Meep here. Now, how can we work on making your poetry NOT sound like ...

I absolutely love American history, and I'm fairly happy living where I do, but am I especially proud to be a part of the United States today? No, actually, I'm ...