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Thanks guys! I meant it to be a dying diction--like the words are literally dying with all the words, lol. But will work on it. I had suspected it might ...

1. It's blurry. This makes me sad. 2. You should crop it; the pendant is too close to the bottom edge.

*agrees like crazy with Fand* So many such a small space...it's drowning in its own, well, diction. I dislike drowning. Also, any particular reason it's one long, drawn-out sentence? I ...

Haha, the famous and ever-popular "I am from" poem. I think these kinds of typical-English-assignment poems can only go so far, but you've put in some great images and feelings ...

I share the others' concerns. What really stood out about this poem was the strong rhythm and rhyme. I could almost see it as a song or performance poem. Unfortunately, ...

Her legs look a little funny to be, but perhaps that's because she's floating in space and not actually walking on something.

I used to be in Magic Club back in middle school. I was never very good at street magic (partly because I don't practice, partly because my hands were and ...

I hate it as much as the next girl...but I think it's not so much the objects, places, or characters in the story so much as how the story itself ...

Did anyone think electric guitar was too overpowering. I've been listening to the track and it just seems so loud. But I'm a perfectionist... I thought the electric guitar was ...

This poem really failed for me, gummy, I think because of your habit of getting a little too convoluted and abstract in your description. The opening three lines are decent, ...

NOT ACCEPTING/ RETIRED name: Colleen age: 16 (junior in high school) what you write: Mostly poetry. what you review: Mostly poetry, but I'll look at short stories, essays, and art ...

When I understand it, Physics is [insert adjective] wonderful. When I don't understand it, which happens a lot more often, Physics is [insert adjective] the spawn of the devil. So ...

Nate makes a fine point; the cultural division has existed for ages and ages; it's not going to smooth itself over for a long time. There are cultural differences everywhere, ...

I strongly agree with bubbles, and most of what I would say has already been said. My main suggestion has to do with sentence structure and style; in a fifteen-line ...

Oh, goody, the link works now. As I said before, I do like the lyrics. The song was pleasant to listen to; you could have gone a little farther with ...