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Banned for tricking me into thinking that I could see her country by leaning over a steep cliff...EEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH...!

Very cool. I love the expression on the girl's face. Is the purple creature with the blue belly supposed to make me think of Barney the Dinosaur?

(The great Brad does it again.) I think a lot of our less talented poets (well, that's about 99.9999% of YWS) could learn a lot from what you've done here. ...

I agree with what some others have said about parts of this being a little tired, a little cliche. But I think what you have at the core is good. ...

Another New Yorker? Me too! Hurrah and welcome to YWS!

She's like a superhero or something...Crit Girl, perhaps. She wears spandex and a red cape and flies around the literature forums blowing up improperly used apostrophes... :smt041 Anyway, congratulati

thx for the critiques, guys! for fand, the title was not meant to be "screaming". I just wrote it because I always title my poems/songs in capslock. but anyways, thx ...

I agree with write me. It's hard to keep them out. We have several thousand miles of border and no matter what we do there, illegal immigrants will do something ...

I was so ready to critique this until I scrolled down and discovered that Fand said everything I wanted to say. Read over her advice on originality. This poem could ...

*confetti* Congrats, you guys!

What I'm guessing on the "end of the world" point at the end is that you're trying to express that killing is evil, that war and violence will be the ...

I really like it. Simple, but thoughtful. I hear he is from Liberia--it is in Africa, I think. This part came off awkwardly. You might rephrase: "I think it's in ...

One thing I've wanted to do for ages (but haven't got around to) is to write quotes or whole poems or songs on the paper lanterns that hang over my ...

I think the show gets dumber by the episode...but yes, I am watching the season premiere.

So how many of you have seen the sweet new commercial for the video Nano? I really want to see one, well, in person. I need to go to Best ...