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I have to say I like it. Phorcys may have a point in that the waking-up-in-a-torture-room narrative is a little overdone, but it was well-written enough to overcome that. I ...

I only have to say that one cannot compare words to women in makeup and call it even. True, if he tacked a meaning onto his words they would be ...

While still rough, perhaps this is a decent alternative. Also, not all poetry is meant to instruct Colleen, and beauty without meaning is beauty nonetheless. What is the point? I'm ...

xhalcyonx128 - Oh, I recognize the loads of religious allusion in HP. I was just saying she didn't go into addressing religious conflicts in the books. There are no fights ...

Ahhh LizzyG; Cliches exist because they are so very relate-able to the human being ^.^ Thus while your poem may be a cliche it is merely because it selects and ...

Ooh, this is fun. I can get extra credit in AP Physics by carving a physics pumpkin, so maybe I'll put it up here!

This is a decent essay. It flows well while efficiently disclosing information. Your main problems are mainly in syntax and grammar and all that--I'm just going to correct them here. ...

I'm not really sure what to think of it, Cameron. I enjoyed the imagery, but as far as I can tell, this poem has little or no point. It displays ...

I think it's perfectly legitimate that Rowling doesn't reveal Dumbledore's sexuality in the books. We've all probably noticed that she carefully avoids controversial modern issues like religion (thoug

Thanks for all the comments, guys. Someone asked what kind of camera I have...it's a Canon Digital Rebel 300D, the original Rebel. It's a cheaper, more accessible digital SLR. When ...

Love is cliche....but so is this poem. Only the ending really struck me as something interesting. I think this has the potential to be much improved, though; this poem should ...

Wow, Brad went on a critiquing binge today! I'd have to agree with him. I think this topic could be pulled off, but you need a little more practice. It's ...

I rather enjoyed it. It made me think of Walt Whitman's "Song of Myself", especially III. I disagree with Brad's comment on the speaker's confusion--I think that, for the mots ...

Don't we all? I'm not hoping to put the next great American novel out goal is to get a few of my poems into literary magazines and the like, which ...

I, too, am a high school junior who's an editor of the literary magazine. LITMAGS FOR LIFE! Anyway. Welcome to YWS, pm me if you have any questions, and I ...