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It's because she's such a quack. ...I'm sorry, I really am. I had to.

The last line makes me very, very unhappy. I really liked the poem until then...but that line is unnecessary and really ruins the feel of the whole poem. But really, ...

No, Snoinkus, by all means call him Mr. Jerkface. I totally support that. All the way. *high-five*

You have some really gorgeous stuff here, but I feel it was too much description and too little substance. Description. The way you describe something can say a lot about ...

Hmm. Not sure what to make of this...very interesting stuff, veerrry interesting. I like the very free-form approach to it. It's confusing to read, but enjoyable at the same time...it's ...

Hahaha, funny. It's an enjoyable piece, but I'm obviously not going to take it seriously. But I congratulate you on putting humor into a poem. Very cool. You might try ...

Already did one! You've inspired me. I'll do more later? Yay!

It's a nice image, but I think you could expand on it. We've all seen pretty pictures of mountains and naturey things before, but what can you show us that's ...

Oh Heather, you're amazing! You deserve some sort of award for this. I would bake you a pie, but it would be hard to ship it to England and still ...

Goooooooo Barty!

Haha, so Colly has failed a physics test because the physics department decided to make all the questions in variable form instead of using real numbers. Fortunately, her wonderful physics ...

Haha, this is me playing with Photoshop Elements at two in the morning: So, what would your birthday card to YWS look like?

Happy birthday to you, Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday dear YWS, Happy birthday to you! *confetti*

I agree with gadi. Sometimes a little brutal honesty is necessary when it comes to improving your work. This is what we would describe as "an emo poem." Emo poetry ...