Cade

Revision posted 11-17. This is the first poem I ever posted on YWS, and eleven months later, I finally put up an edit. Niiiiice. Thanks for reviewing (ages ago) to ...

Clay Aiken AND Oprah Winfrey? That sounds like a recipe for...death... No, really, if Clay Aiken (or anyone remotely affiliated with American Idol, for that matter) showed up at my ...

Like Suz, I'm stuck between liking this poem and agreeing with Brad. I enjoy the feel and tone of the poem; you crafted it beautifully. I actually have "Across the ...

I suppose your best option is to ignore him and wait for the end of the year. Until then, keep all your precious possessions velcroed to your body.

Ooh, lovely. I'm a New Yorker too! Rochester, which really strangely doesn't have any snow right now. What's the body of water in your backyard? It looks like a wonderful ...

Shouldn't this be in the Debate usergroup forum? I don't know why there's such a big issue--as Brad said over in the original thread, it's a matter of free speech. ...

I enjoyed this piece; I think you did a fantastic job of bringing out that scary feeling described here. Flow. I think your main problem is that the writing is ...

Hey! I'll echo Sumi and say WELCOME! Yes, please try to crit other people's work when you post your own. Otherwise, no one will want to crit yours, and that's ...

Some people don't like it much, but I enjoy listening to Pandora . You type in a song or artist you like and it plays music that's similar. It's a ...

Plenty of great books challenge or re-interpret popular opinion. That's what makes them so good. It doesn't have to be outright, humongous controversy involving a highly explosive subject (see: Da ...

This is really awful, but I can see what Brad is saying. They do have a right to do that. These parents should be pushing for education and charater-building in ...

Snow! It's times like this I almost wish I wasn't a CA girl... well, from the part of CA that doesn't get snow :p No snow days! No, really Mesh, ...

Normally the first snow is in October around here. But look at this, halfway through November and still not a snowflake, and today was rather nice. We have had frost, ...

Oh my god, Snoink, you've gotten me addicted to it!

I really like it when I read a poem that doesn't need my big red "cliche" stamp. I liked this quite a bit. I especially liked the way you put ...