Cade

I saw that you've recently posted a lot of stuff--try not to post more than one thing a day. It drives people away from your work. I'm not sure what ...

It's generally frowned upon to put a poll up on your literary works; save it for the Lounge and usergroups. I was surprised that you used first person in this ...

Oooh, it's annoying when parents get like that. They need to understand that you're growing up, things are getting harder, and that a B is a perfectly fine grade. I ...

Scholarships? Where? (No, really Suzie, I know nothing of this magical search for college money, and you must tell me who you are writing these essays for.) What people have ...

I liked the beginning much better than I liked the end. The use of numbers made it much more whimsical and humorous (in a bitter sort of way) than the ...

The mice are so cute! I don't know if I could ever own one, though. I mean, my cat gets jealous of my brother's guinea pig! Oooh, ninth grade...I never ...

Hey Cuni! I took a look at your story; I generally stay away from science fiction. Not my thing. If you have something you think is worthwhile, get it out ...

Summer, it's generally encouraged that you only post one new piece per day on the YWS forums. Posting less than that is good too. If people see an explosion of ...

"injoy"? Please. As Snoink said, this doesn't seem like a poem. I would clarify; this isn't a sophisticated poem. It's just fine for children's verse or a picture book, but ...

*jumps up and down, waving hand in air* WALT WHITMAN, WALT WHITMAN! Though I'm ambivalent about a lot of his word, e.e. cummings has certainly influenced the way I think ...

Granted, but you only become famous after you die. I wish I was eating a delicious chocolate bar.

Granted, but he never showers. I wish I had a $100000 dollar Barnes & Noble gift card.

I would reeeally love this poem to be, um, coherent? I don't want to sound really, really mean, but I think I'm about to. This is, as far as I ...

This is cute and funny, but I feel like I've read it before. See, there are a billion other poems out there JUST LIKE this one that express the same ...

Haha, thanks guys. Wow, Ayra, I didn't expect to ever see this post revived. I think, gadi, that they are allowed to change. Sophistication in writing is often shown by ...