Cade

Haha, yes, Nate. I see that you've fixed the bug. Except when I logged on it said there had been over 11,000 posts since my last visit. :lol:

You ARE loved. I wish the best for you, and I can't wait to see the photos!

I don't know if anyone else noticed this or not...Nate, are you playing a joke on us all? Some of the dates are showing up as December 2008, not 2007, ...

im just a begginer so please bear with me my mom has bunders full of things like this and im just stretching my wings< jokeing... anyways i personally always like ...

I'm still curious...blue sky's what? You ought to know by now that using an apostrophe there demonstrates possession. If you meant plural skies , please change the title to reflect ...

Haha, when I saw that first one, my head exploded and screamed, "Across the Universe!" It could have used some brighter color, especially on the strawberries. And Jude's head does ...

Ed, you're BACK! Well, "back?" according to your custom title. Do remove the question mark one of these days. As always with your poetry, it sounds amazing and means very ...

Ooh, I forgot to add that I noticed mistakes. I mean, I noticed movie mistakes. Most notably the scene which is supposed to be set in 1995 but has the ...

I saw was decent. SO CHEESY but cute. Freddie Highmore is just amazing. But Robin Williams as the Wizard was great, he was my favorite.

Welcome back, and best of luck. I hope everything works out for you, JC. One of my best friends is named Bella. Lovely name. It means "beautiful," after all!

I generally agree with Via and Suz. This is a good start, but you mostly need to work on making it smooth. Right now you have a lot of ideas ...

It's like Legally Blonde meets Little Red Riding Hood...

Hey, new member, slow down! You must not have noticed the rules for posting. Please try to critique AT LEAST two pieces before you post your own, try to keep ...

I'm shocked that none of Brad's poems made "Best Poem." Are you kidding me, I want to shoot Snoink! It's like one of those things that's too good to exist ...

Hey, I see you're new, so welcome to YWS! I think this poem is a little too straightforward to stand out much. You did a fair job on the rhyme ...