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This reads like a pop song. That's not really a good thing. Basically, if you took out all the cliches, it might...oh, wait, never mind, if you take out all ...

I feel like it would be a really adorable story if they were good friends or something, but once you get to a really involved relationship like starts to get ...

Oh, yeah, thanks a bunch of dragging this piece of crap up again, jessiieeboo. I kid. Thanks for the comments, guys, though I don't even think this piece exists on ...

I agree with Rjjr_vectra. This is completely self-absorbed and belongs in a diary or a pop song. Remember that in poetry it's okay to talk about yourself, but you can't ...

Made some capitalizations. Anymore than that, I'd be redefining a flashing arrow. :\ By "a flashing arrow," do you mean to say that the poem's message is obvious? As a ...

Freaking awesome! I always admire people who can write prose...I personally can't pay attention very long and I like to be uber-concise, so I stick to poetry. Whenever I attempt ...

I'm assuming that you're trying to say something about Leonardo Da Vinci, but the parallels aren't quite clear enough for me to see...I'm afraid I don't understand the poem. I ...

Hmm. My problem with this poem is that it's a little too broad . It has a stream-of-consciousness feel to it, and that's not necessarily a good thing in your ...

I say, try to start with something specific and then expand. Maybe tell a story about the day you realized you loved writing, or about a compliment someone gave you, ...

I think my friend's dog is nearly bilingual. He's a Russian doggy, so she usually gives him commands in Russian, but he knows some English, I think. The dog is ...

Thankfully this manages to be more coherent and polished than the average emo poem, but it is still an "emo poem" in that it's very self-absorbed and not terribly original. ...

I enjoyed the tone and rhythm of this poem, but the content didn't really stand out to me. I felt that the growing-up-seasons similes were rather basic, almost childish. I ...

Read the full story here . Even for the once-notorious Hell’s Kitchen neighborhood, it may have been a first: Two men were arrested on Tuesday after pushing a corpse, seated ...

Granted, but then those three are your only friends. I wish the TV remote worked.

To be blunt, thinking this stubbornly is not going to help you become a better writer. I'm all for creative expression, don't get me wrong. But it's true that there ...