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Agree with Eimear. "Overkill" is right. The poem revolves around this horrid pattern of repetition. It reeks of first grade. Not only is the repetition annoying, I'm not sure you ...

I don't believe it is murder. It's a women's body, and she can do what ever she wants with it. The fetus is a human entity that has human DNA. ...

I'm going to have to agree with SHM. I think this poem has a lot of potential in terms of expressing emotion--unrequited love? Love lost? It's fine if you write ...

Oh, Ari, you are the best! A thousand congratulations, no, a million. You're going to be wonderful!

Some of their stuff sounds a lot alike or it's too pop-ish for my tastes. But I own "So Sudden" and I really like some of their songs..."City Traffic Puzzle" ...

I agree with Melja. The poem is way too vague to lead anywhere. It's like listening to two people share an inside joke...you have no idea what's going on. You ...

There are already abortion threads in the Debate forum. But in response to this one. A woman has a right to her own body. I say, her uterus happens to ...

No, smorg, I wouldn't define it as prose-poetry either. And yes, RIP could be a prose-poem if I took the line breaks out, which I've considered doing. I just don't ...

To all: There is such a thing as prose-poetry. It can be legitimately posted in the poetry section. alfletcher--What do you really want to SAY with this? We all know ...

Rating changed to R for language.

Clockworks, I noticed that this is at least your second new poem today. Please refrain from posting more than one work per day, and remember to do a lot of ...

I know what a pantoum is, and I recognize this as one. But using a particular repetitive format such as a pantoum or a vilanelle doesn't justify a lack of ...

I agree with Liz in that it's too preachy for its own good. This isn't so much a poem as a rant with line breaks. Subtlety is a very good ...

He came down to the battlefields after the killing was over, saw the bodies scattered around like blue and grey leaves in autumn. But his photographs were black-and-white and the ...

My high school is doing Fiddler right now. I've never seen one on Broadway, but I'd love to! I am a huge fan of West Side Story...let's see, the King ...