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Yep. He has resigned now, and lieutenant governor David Paterson will take office on Monday. A lot of people are now criticizing Paterson because he is 'too liberal' and will ...

I'm not going to say anything on this poem, because I want people to interpret it the way they feel it should be. What do YOU think it is saying? ...

If you were looking for a critique, this is not the right forum. Look for the Fiction forums under "Writing" at the top bar on your screen. If you were ...

I actually did eat pie at 1:59 today. It was apple pie. ...Wow. I am a NERD. At least I didn't take the radius of my pie and calculate its ...

forgot to mention its free verse. i'm not particularly into following a fixed rhythm. i just put my thoughts on paper in the best way possible. but i will definitely ...

Yeah, big mounds are usually the result of plowing. Here we get loads and loads of snow. This winter has actually been decent. I don't know the statistics, but it's ...

As a resident of New York, this is all I've heard about all day. Federal wiretaps have essentially uncovered New York governor Eliot Spitzer's involvement in a prostitution ring. He ...

See, I just think it's funny that they do this. Making lists of sins and all. Like, "This is officially a no-no now. Thank you. That is all." Though I'm ...

A bump is a bump. If you really want your piece to get some comments, you could ask a friend or an instructor, for example, to critique it. And in ...

I agree with Galatea. There are benefits to nuclear power, but the waste issue would, in time, eventually become as hurtful to our environment as our current methods are today. ...

It's sweet...but that's about all it has. It doesn't strike me as that original...even the speaker's voice is very...Lifetime movie, know what I mean? But really, originality is the big ...

Snoink, you're such a darling. I mean that in the you-as-a-person-sense and the you-meaning-the-speaker-of-this-poem sense. It's strong because the voice is so personal. You manage to have your speake

afamiliarsmile - Bumping your piece is generally frowned upon at YWS. I probably shouldn't be rewarding it with a critique, but as I'm here... The first paragraph is a great ...

For my super-humongous research paper for AP Lang & Comp, I have chosen to write about why English programs are important in schools and why they should receive more emphasis. ...

I'm going to echo lots of other people and say, "Don't try to decide on this when you're thirteen." Really, don't. No matter how many teachers and counselors try to ...