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Idle muse, I don't think that's very much a legitimate argument--you can't make assumptions about what an entire group considers 'cool' based on the presence of a Y chromosome. I ...

We had a discussion in Sociology about this. We agreed that the proliferation of sites like Youtube and Facebook create this idea of everyone getting his/her fifteen minutes of fame, ...

I could also have subbed in a friend's name for your name, because she's the same way about the stuff I write, except that she knows who I like and ...

Thanks for the feedback! 8 April Maybe it is not so bad to be out of love— Suzanne, who likes my poetry, has never complained that a heart never opened ...

Suz - here I've just rearranged the poem a tad, the way I might edit it. How the Silver Wears Who’d have thought soapy spoons, forks and knives would remind ...

Nate, you should've plugged YWS: Quote: Some fans were left behind on the platform at L'Enfant Plaza as Green Line trains filled up. Others crammed into trains, their red Nationals ...

Unfortunately, writing about writer's block is so overdone I don't know that I've ever seen it done well. The description of a blank page is possibly THE largest cliche when ...

April 8: I think this poem focuses too much on the surface--the description of the two people and of the speaker's immediate feelings. I'd love to see you go more ...

:D Suz, I like this one a lot! I may or may not return for a more meaningful critique later.

7 April The high school girls stand with their cigarettes on the corner where the blacktop and the sidewalk meet. The little creek, nameless but familiar to the students, and ...

Can your topic be about absolutely anything? If you decide to do "Is reading a lost art?" send me a PM because I just did a nine-page research paper on ...

Suz, Gadi, Jas: I am not worthy of your praise! 6 April One day, B, you will be an old woman. Your plump little hands will be barely alive, long ...

*attacks* YAY! This is my cousin, y'all. She's awesome. :D

Snoink, have I ever mentioned that you're really awesome?

Betsy - I noticed that you posted two poems one after the other today. Good job getting your two critiques done before doing that, but keep in mind that we ...