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I do like it. When I actually crawl out of my happy place in the Poetry forums to critique fiction, it means I either like it or hate it so ...

You have some very fine images and a good, thoughtful tone throughout Intercellular Jihad. I'm not much for politically charged poetry, but you've addressed this subtly and tastefully. the blood ...

22 April I imagine that when he took the fruit, he was just as curious as she when she snatched it from the tree.

I posted the Wikipedia article because it seemed to me that "cut spelling" is not synonymous with "chatspeak". Unless WriterAddict intended that the question address chatspeak or textspeak (or whateve

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Ooh, I feel so special. On my fourth page of the thread now. XD 21 April And to imagine that we know so much of love. Whispering our secrets out ...

>.< Good catch there Leja. And thanks a bunch, Jas!

I like the way the red sort of takes over from one side, but you could use it a little more sparingly--use it more on her body and around her, ...

Ain't no such thing as being too critical.

I really like 13 April. Short and sweet, yes? 14 is not as impressive. It's very wordy (as a lot of your stuff is :wink:), rather like slogging through some ...

20 April Bella and I search for four-leaf clovers in the grass just past the sidewalk. I am jealous as a child is jealous, because she has found three already, ...

I think the point Brad was trying to make is that you can't know those girls' qualifications as a whole. Do you have evidence that girls with better scores, tougher ...

I know I already thanked you in your own thread, but...Heather...wow... :D Oh, and in 17, 'hand' is on the one line to service the rhyme scheme in the poem. ...

I have journeyed to Wikipedia to find out what cut spelling is. Next time, WriterAddict, please inform us? Cut Spelling From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia Cut Spelling is a system ...

*gapes* Heather, you wonderful creature! You just critiqued all 19 poems I've written this month and...and... So I feel really guilty about not being active in other people's NaPoWriMo poems. ...