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*locked* Your subtitle reads that a friend wrote this poem. Please only post your own work.

Energy—motion—energy— the pen an applied force, electrons circling an unstable nucleus. This is not my method of discovery; yet my eyes follow the curves, the loops, dots, and dashes we've ...

ChildofEden--Here at YWS we want you to do two reviews before posting your own work...a little late here, but maybe you just missed the rules? Anyway, get critiquing and remember ...

My question is, how do you enforce that?

Be careful of confusing line breaks with punctuation; a line break does not denote a pause. Other than that, Suzanne's response was very good. She knows her stuff.

Hey ejbrown, I see you haven't written any critiques yet, but you have posted your own piece already. YWS usually requests that you do TWO critiques before posting new work, ...

Natee I totally loved thissss its like my life rite now...write moree!!!!111!!1

lulu--I see you're new, so maybe you haven't gotten around to reading the rules. I just want to inform/remind you that YWS would like you to do two critiques before ...

who told you poetry was about grammar and punctuation? I've read a few poets who've been published who intentionally leave out punctuation and use even odd punctuation. Look at the ...

I agree with some of you in that some things people could say aren't 'right' (what is truth, anyway...but we won't get into that) but my argument isn't about specific ...

I had a conversation with a friend today in which we discussed the extent of free speech. My friend argues that people shouldn't be allowed to speak/print blatant lies...the example ...

I'm really proud of myself because I did write one poem a day, every day, and on the eighteenth I wrote two, for a total of 31 poems. I think ...

Last day...melancholy...but the freedom! :wink: 30 April today is the last day I write a poem because I have to, but for some reason, it doesn't seem so hard. maybe ...

Ah, the classic school newspaper op-ed piece. To each his own, Kang; I don't think that the aspects you criticized are necessarily wrong . I enjoy the style of narration ...

29 April He was wearing a helmet, parachute, thermal flight suit, waterproof coveralls and a buoyant chair. -BBC News Father Adelir de Carli left Paranagua last Sunday by way of ...