Cade

GET IT. It is incredibly sexy. I love the new Firefox.

I started this poem not expecting to like it very much for some reason, but I really did. I think in the beginning I was confused, but after a re-read ...

khfan, it wasn't that they were being sluts, it was that they actually wanted to get pregnant. There's a big difference between becoming pregnant unexpectedly and sleeping with someone with ...

The new Firefox is decidedly very sexy!

Banned for going undercover.

Haha, it's not that obscure, and I don't really listen to Bright Eyes. But I'll still be your best friend. Of course, we get mixed messages in writing. On the ...

Looks fine to me!

Banned for having blue skin.

Showing , as you've probably heard from reviewers, is preferable to telling . I always use the example of a pie. Now, you could just say to someone, "Why, this ...

This is the first day of my life, swear I was born right in the doorway...*sings* I like the idea behind this poem, and the way you've structured it, but ...

Four-Leafed Clovers Surprising that we would find so many in the small places in the sun, and to think, statistically, the number there must be in the lawns all over ...

My first impression is that it's wordy, particularly in the last stanza, and melodramatic. I think a line-by-line critique is appropriate! :D We have not deserted our bloodied, beloved city. ...

This is more babble than a poem. What can you offer us besides the romantic ramblings of a teenage girl? You must make your reader care. What about this poem ...

Congratulations, you're the most recent recipient of one of my rare fiction critiques. Take a picture or something. Meaning and purpose. I almost feel as though I've read this piece ...

Banned for being too dang pretty.