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By all means, break out the riding crops and smack away. When I have kids, they're not leaving the house each morning without a few whacks across the face.

I read part of The Rasputin File for my project. It's probably the most accurate research, but half of it is totally boring, probably because Radzinsky spends about forty pages ...

OMG I totally did a huge report on this in tenth grade. I don't think it really matters how you spell his name, because he's Russian. I've usually seen Grigory ...

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The shape is cool, but there are too many lines for my taste. Too busy.

As much as I love YWS and wish to see it free of its shackles--I mean wholesome advertisements--I don't think so. Part of it is that my parents, who are ...

I live in western NY, and I've actually never been to the city itself, but like others said, I imagine it depends which part of the city your character lives ...

Thanks, all! Gadi and Leja - thanks for your suggestions regarding word choice. Gadi, I do like, however, 'the writing of poetry'. I feel that saying only 'poetry' would 1) ...

Done. I went crazy on it. :D Love, Colly

Punctuation. I'm going to echo Leja's bit about the punctuation. Don't put commas at the end of line breaks unless they really belong! Write sentences as you would normally. For ...

Best of luck, Sunny! I know that in the end you'll make the right decision, whatever that is. If you truly feel that the college you chose is the one ...

thunderdude and Rei, please let up on the ad hominem attacks!

suprising this thread hasn't been locked. Some other threads about abortion have been. this could start an argument but then again it's a poem. But to the other reviewers of ...

Ooh, I do like this one. The voice is very comfortable, very charming. It sounds almost like I'm just listening to a next-door neighbor talk. I also love the twist ...

Charliebo - This is the Poetry forum, not the Debate forum. Most of your post was argumentative, not a please try to critique without debating! That said, the poem invited ...