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Now, normally I don't post stuff the same day I write it. But I was feeling spontaneous. Please rip it to shreds. -- Did you know, Suzanne, that I intended ...

I loved the poem at the beginning, but from then it went slightly downhill. Not all the way down the hill, you know, and the hill has a very shallow ...

Overall, I finish reading this poem and wonder, "So what?" It's mostly description, and while the description is decent, I should like for it to go somewhere, know what I ...

I think we should all get thicker skins. -Kylan Bravo. Yeah, part of it is that some people actually are offended, and others are getting offended for them because they ...

I like it, but as always, I complain that it is too wordy and complicated. Here is how I would rephrase to make stuff flow better or sound less wordy. ...

Hey Minniax! My first piece of advice would be to not post all your poems in one thread. Post them separately, but of course not all on one day. That ...

Jared and OverEasy - I should be able to get to those within the next few days. Jamie - We'll see about that story. :wink:

YWS is a burning pit of despair in which my tortured soul shall eternally be trapped. Actually, I like the way the laughing smiley looks like he's about to sneeze ...

Dunno about Cartoon Network, but all Disney shows now are exactly the same...oh god, the number of times I've been forced to watch Hannah Montana while babysitting. I think Disney ...

I agree with Mesh in that the poem is rather...vague...and as much as I think that's part of its charm, I feel that it needs to be more firmly grounded ...

I love it! I do envy people who are good at drawing. I think the line of her knuckle is oddly straight and firm. Err...the size of the face actually ...

fine then :cry: I'm really sad but I need to ask a question how do I get rid of it? Do you want to get rid of the centering, or ...

Also, I should like to explain my 'Other' vote: Nate/Buchanan '08.

While many of the same methods used to critique prose also apply to poetry, there are some things you ought to know about reviewing verse! 1) "More what you'd call ...

Ugh. I don't really like either one. McCain's too....status quo....and Obama's too I'm-gonna-change-the-status-quo-but-nothing-will-really-happen. I'm a moderate, leaning liberal, so I consider Obama