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"Easy" (Barenaked Ladies) to get away with murder, dear.

Can cows think these thinks you think they think?

Brain-freeze!

That's cute. This seems to be more of a joke, so I'm not going to critique it. I disagree with Adam; I like that he talks to the reader. I ...

Oooh, AP US, eh? I'm a sophomore and I'm dying to take it next year, despite the countless stories of juniors pulling all-nighters to finish the homework. One of the ...

The rhyme was difficult to read because the ends of phrases and the ends of lines don't match up. It can be done, of course, but the right places just ...

This poem has failed for me because it didn't make me feel anything or appreciate anything the author said. It was a bunch of cliches, except for that random Star ...

I agree with bubbles and Cameron. This seems a bit different from the rest of your work. I enjoyed it in a different way. Rhyme! My goodness! The rhyme isn't ...

How do I love thee? Let me count the ways... Okay, your poem didn't quite measure up to Sonnet 43. The idea here is cliche and overdone; the poem wasn't ...

The first line drew me in right away. It sets down the basic idea for the rest of the poem and laid down something concrete, this pen drawing bit. Okay, ...

The first line drew me in right away. It sets down the basic idea for the rest of the poem and laid down something concrete, this pen drawing bit. Okay, ...

Gosh, get some punctuation in here! And capitalization and whatnot. "I'll be that girl", great! You got that song by the Barenaked Ladies stuck in my head. Good music, theirs. ...

Mmm. A tad difficult to chew, but still delicious. I liked some of the images and ideas in here, but I'm not really sure what this poem is about. Contrasting ...

It was during our biology field trip to Cape Cod. Some friends and I were sitting outside our cabin early in the morning. We always were up before everyone else ...

I'm in. And I'm in to win. Today I am announcing that I will form an exploratory committee to run for president. And I want you to join me not ...