Cade

I always thought that deceitful people were politicians. (Erm, still think so.)

Butterflies!

Capillaries.

Same.

Granted, but this is "corrupt a wish" not "corrupt a dream", so it looks like you've used the wrong word. I wish the phonebook would stop peeing on the keyboard.

Mole.

Law.

As others have said, don't take critiques personally. If the poem means something to you, I'm all for that. Writing poetry to express emotion can be very therapeutic. Still, posting ...

"My mama always said life was like a box of chocolates..." -Forrest Gump This poem didn't bring anything new to the table, and it's basically a bunch of phrases babbling ...

Ties.

Dear Running Out, I suggest using shock technology to wean your friends off of the graham crackers. Of course, this method may leave you with no friends and a houseful ...

*pats Clau's head* No need to hate your poetry! No, it wasn't the best, but it was a good idea, so hang on to it and rewrite it in six ...

Granted, but all of your books will spontaneously combust on the truck out of the printer's. I wish I didn't have a math midterm tomorrow.

Of course, I'm a fifteen-year-old girl from the suburbs and my experience with politics consists mostly of a 3-day field trip to Washington D.C. in the seventh grade, but I ...

I always thought that housing was overrated.