Cade

Onions.

Granted, but he's currently being held hostage by Martian revolutionaries. I wish I had film in my camera.

Finally, more of Incan's poetry! Hurrah for opium? I'm guessing the way everything seems to be somewhat over-dramatized ( "O crepuscular angel, O my filthy licorice: Make my body/ the ...

Hi there!

I agree, the ending sounded strange - like an essay. The story was fine, though. I'd like to see you mix up your sentences a little more; so many of ...

Mime.

Poodle.

Soon-to-be girlfriend? Somebody has plans, eh? I'm really sick and disoriented and angry right now, and am therefore rendered unable to write a coherent critique. I agree with Clau; this ...

Granted, but then the phonebook might pee on you. I wish my Spanish teacher would retire.

I used to feel like this, too; I knew I had some sort of a gift for it at a young age, and I went crazy when we had to ...

"I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For" U2

You know I am tempted to change that "e" to something else...but I won't. Dome.

Ears. (don't ask)

When the giants came to steal her soul away, she went without a fight.

Adorable idea, with that twist ending I suppose kiddies would like. You said it was a children's story? I can totally see that; the writing is simple but enjoyable. What ...