Cade

Men.

I always thought that stones were the same thing as pebbles.

"I Want To Break Free" Queen.

Is that your pet monkey over there pooping on the exotic plant?

Have you ever read Beggars in Spain by Nancy Kress? Genetics is something humans should study, and messing around with genes is awfully dangerous.

Granted, but it's actually Italian toast posing as French toast, and it's loaded with cholesterol. I wish my brother went to boarding school.

First of all, title: "Heart Brake "? Do you mean "Heart Break" or is it meant to show that your heart was physically stopped? I make the same spelling error ...

Hmm. No, chemistry does not equal astronomy. While this was well-constructed and unique, I felt that it was cluttered up with too many scientific references to flow as nicely as ...

Of course Columbine was a crappy situation. War is also a crappy situation, even if some people believe it is for "noble" goals. War upsets me. I wouldn't play video ...

Granted, but you'll fly into a building or an airplane, and then you'll just wish to live... I wish my favorite pair of pants wasn't developing a hole on the ...

Punctuation, capitalization, and spelling take two seconds, and the poem's lack of them is highly distracting to the reader. Try getting those in next time. It's a cute idea, but ...

Granted, but now he's downloose, and...uh-oh, there go his pants... I wish I had a new Spanish notebook.

Do all those things that bonafide says if you want to keep this poem; her suggestions were excellent. You certainly had capitalization and punctuation mistakes, but those are easily fixed ...

Granted, but you've churned it out so fast it's riddled with errors and your readers commit suicide upon seeing it. I wish my friends were a little more sensitive and ...

GOOOOOOOGLE.