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Oh, I do have a thing for love poetry, I do. I identify two main problems in what is otherwise a strong poem: 1) It's too prosaic. To be fair, ...

Hi there Jared! Hmm. I think, first of all, that the poem hasn't quite done its job in creeping me out...I'm guessing that's the effect you were going for, but ...

Lolz, this would so happen in the Deep South. Not that I'm a stereotyping Yankee or anything like that.

I think it is shows the complete ignorance of America. For the people who didn't know Obama is a Christian. Just because his middle name is Hussain, it doesn't mean ...

Hi ArmedToTheHorns! I see that you have 3 posts, but no reviews under your belt! I'd like to remind you that at YWS we request that you critique at least ...

Whoo Saint for popping in on the American side...yeah, here AP's are sort of national achievement tests. You can score a 1-5, 1 being the lowest and 5 being the ...

Granted, but now your cousin smells like rotten eggs. I wish my foot weren't falling asleep.

Granted but it's been sat on. I wish I knew what to write my college essay about!

Ooh, Melja, Bob Dylan and Hans Zimmer together on the same list? I wholeheartedly approve. You are awarded a 9/10. 1. "Grade 9" Barenaked Ladies 2. "When I'm Sixty-Four" the ...

I actually prefer writing cursive...I actually recommend it. I never chose to do it when I was younger (when I had the choice, that is) but in my sophomore year ...

I think it's more rewarding to be actually published...they say a writer's goal is to paper his bathroom with rejection slips. If you're in high school, this is your opportunity ...

Well, I don't know if you can say the victim--or meal, or whatever you'd like to call him--really consented to this. After all, it was just being advertised on the ...

East of Eden by John Steinbeck. I'm serious. I am so completely in love with that book. I reference it in most conversations.

Chill, Victer. :D All I meant was that the blog's a little rant-ish for my taste.

I wouldn't necessarily consider purple prose to be "beautiful" writing. There's a fine line. You can have very descriptive writing that is beautiful, or very descriptive writing that is purple. ...