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Very whimsical. It's odd, but adorably so. Perhaps like Dr. Seuss: "One fish, two fish, red fish, blue fish." There's obviously not much you're trying to say here. It just ...

Granted, but the time machine you got to take you to April took you to April in the year 3007 instead of 2007 and now you're miserable because you can't ...

SENATOR JOSEPH R. BIDEN’S characterization of his fellow Democratic presidential contender Senator Barack Obama as “the first mainstream African-American who is articulate and bright and clean and

It's certainly much better than selling the stuff on eBay. And I thought football was stupid! I still won't be watching the Super Bowl, though. Colleen

Sunlight coats the icicles that cling to our gutters. I sigh, knowing they won’t disappear for another six weeks, probably more. The kids across the street learn that, when making ...

Glasses.

Granted, but now that you have no homework, you have to do chores. I wish I had some ice cream cake.

Welcome, JA! *hugs penguins*

"Life is like a box of chocolates." "Life is like a roller coaster." Look, life can be like anything. My friend and I once played a game where we related ...

This came off as awfully tell-y and not show-y. Instead of saying, "Kara is jealous," or something, give me some actions or thoughts that show me she's jealous. The reader ...

I second Clau. This sounds like a Hallmark card and that is not a good thing. It was well-written and well-structured, yes, but it failed to bring me in. I ...

I have absolutely no idea what to make of this. You described it as "abstract poetry" and that seems to be an accurate description. Though I couldn't take much away ...

I'll second the other two with a HURRAH, LOVELY IMAGERY. I could practically feel the sun on the back of my neck. It made me think of when I used ...

One question: How did you find your publisher? Ha, I should be asking my mom this; she's a published poet. I never share my work with her, though. I don't ...

I always thought that annoying relatives happened to everyone.